Wow, I don't know if you will even read this but, regardless, it is worthy of a big thumbs up. Thanks for sharing so much! )

Great work! Very well done!

Really intriguing concept. Good job.

Great fic.

Plot bunny for you: Regular Daniel vs Bad Daniel in an AU...

The idea of a corruptible Daniel is a good one.

Enjoyed the story alot. Once again, someone (you) have thought outside the box and brought us an adventure to experience that the shows writers did not. Even though this is an older story, it is still a good gen team fic and the comraderie between the teammates especially O'Neill and Jackson, ring true to what was portrayed in the first 3 or 4 seasons of the show.

Thanks.

Nice. Good work.

Nice. I really liked Jack's comment, "When hell freezes over." I love it when Jack defends Daniel. Actually, that's one of my favorite aspects to the show. Great job on chapter one. Ready to start chapter two.

THAT was AWESOME!

When I read this fanfic, I get the feeling that this could seriously have happened (in the show). Sometimes I get that feeling with a fic; like someone out there had an idea that the show-writers just never thought of. I got the same feeling from this, you did a wonderful job.

I especially liked Jack's pope comment. Great story. I love these. They're so strong. More please.

Absolutely awesome story.

I'd say more, but I have more of your stories to read!

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Krys, whistling while she 'works' ;-)

this is a fantastic story...Roy, very cool character i hope that u make a sort of sequel that has him in it.

thank you for getting back to me about your writing and good luck with your book!

I apologise for me e-mail problems, we have been infected with a virus and me e-mails are duplicating for s ome reason so I am getting several same e-mails. So your e-mails will continue to be bounced back. Again I apologise for the inconvinience.

if you could please keep me updated could you contact me at linschick

you may be able to reach me there, but I might not get it, depends on if your e-mail passes through all the barriers on the site (lol).

well best of luck again on future writtings! and congratulations on the opertunity!

lins

This stoy kicks ass! You done a really good job and the reviews you recieved didn't do you justice. Everyone seems to review shippers and stuff, not that shippers are horribly bad but stories like this is a nice change.

So I congradulate you immensely on a job well done. The characters were well writen and the story line well told. The pace was just right and I found this story entertaining and great.

I love it. So uh... good on ya!

Great story. Well plotted and wonderfully interesting.