Please tell me this isn't it! Please please please don't leave it like this! Please write more to this (preferably with Scott & Shelby ending up together again)! Please! You cannot just end it like this!

This was so good! Sooo sad, but so good! You write really well, you should start up some higher ground fics again!

This was a very good story. But what kind of annoyed me was that you never had Scott really explain to Shelby WHY he never came back to her at the MORP. Another thing that annoyed me was the first chapter when Shelby tells Scott a very sincere statement that he should have understood right away, and yet for some reason he doesn't and just assumes she's drunk. You should have had her explain to him what she meant, yeah turns out she really was drunk but she would have been smart enough to say what she really meant. I just thought it was crappy of him to dismiss her statement and all of a sudden assume she's drunk. Turns out she was, but for all he knew at that time she might not have been, and if he took his head out of his ass he could have been smart enough to figure out what she was talking about! lol! Sorry had to get all that out of the way.

Other then that you are a very talented writer and I look forward to seeing more of your work.

The story didn't end as I had hoped, but you have an amazing talent for writing, and even when I knew they weren't going to end up together I couldn't stop reading it. Nicely done.

What a great story! Will there be more chapters?

My God, FANTASTIC! How did I miss this! This is a truly great story, and you should be very proud of it. Very real, and very well written. I don't know if that's the end now or not, but if it is, I hope you write another story very soon. Excellent work.

great! It was so good. You made them see so different but in a way that makes perfect sense

that was absolutely heartwrenching and one hundred percent fantastic. its been a while since i've read a quality hg fic, i hope you keep writing, if not adding to this story then posting others.

Oh sweet mother. You can NOT end there. Oh my.. *hyperventilates* Okay, you are so very awesome! I havn't seen someone so great at writing S/S in so long. You have to write more!

*grovles at your feet*

*cough*

Um yes.

Please write more. please.

did i tell u that ur an amazing writer? if not, then i'm telling you now. that chap almost made me cry, and i never cry! it so painfully beautiful, i have no other words to describe it... you had better keep this story going! don't make me hunt you down!

thats so sad

Sad very sad..update soon! The Husband should die! heheeh...there your flamer!

Okay i am definately hooked. What is up with shelby does she actually have a husband

wow turn about...

Aw! This is really good! Your story is wonderful, I love it.