I like the concept of the forth side to the world triangle (3 males and the queen) thing.

But the preventers at this point are really really new, even in regards to the short lived races, or even some kindred.

You might want to reword that a bit so it is a bit more believable... you know, 'cause gundams and magic are so realistic.

I'm still hoping for an update. Who know ? May be one day...

Keep an alert.

Oh, I do wish you'd continued with this one. The Black Jewels is one of my favorite series.

hey, like the idea you have here. Have not read the Jewels trilogy myself, but from what you have so far it seems interesting. :)

And I so agree that the Gundam boys would cheerfully and effortlessly break every rule in existence. :P

YOU BETTER ADD TO THIS ONE! ITS BEEN OVER THREE YEARS! ADD!

okay now that I have that out of my system, You still better add to this one!Why not have the other g-boys come in right about now, have them scouting the woods or something like that.

*deep breath* WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU? okay now that that is taken care of, MORE PLEASE!

This story is so great. Any chance for an update ?

In the beginning of your summary of the birthright jewel, I think that your information is wrong. In the book, there are children who already have their birthright jewel at six. Saetan asked Jaenelle (age seven) if she had already had the birthright cermony. I think that most children have the birthright cermony around age 6-8. The Offering to the Darkness doesn't have to be after 20. When Jaenelle helped protect her sister by disguising her jewel as a sapphine, her family thought she had made the offering to darkness. The plot of your story seems interesting..._

Excellent story! Please update soon!

Hi! I was reading through my old reviews because I'm going to start working on my BLack Jewels/Gundam again and I found some of the reviews from you and I LOVE YOUR FIC IT'S AWSOME! and thanks for all the help. if you have anymore ideas for my fic send them my way!

hey you wanted me to drop you a line, so i am. i would like you to update some time. My email adress is on here so yeah any way please contact me, via mary or emilie.

Your friend,

Liz

You had better have a valid excuse for not updating in forever, cause this is the only type of this fic i have been able to find here, and frankly i really really really want to know how daemon and lucivar are going to deal with the g-boys... not to mention how the g-boys will deal with them and the rest of the court! but i especially want to know what happens between the pilots and the brothers though i suspect saetan will also be at a loss when it comes to dealing with them. and i really really need you to update soon so that i don't go crazy and do something that i'll probably end up not regreting at all. so please update ASAP! THXS!

hey this is really good i love the x-over and i hope you'll keep going with it-

You should work on this, it's good, Black Jewels Trilogy is one of the best fantasy books EVER, and I love how you wind GW in with it! -

Oh my God! I love your story! i'm completely addicted to the Black Jewels triology and gundam wing! have you read dreams made flesh yet? anyway, keep writing! i want to know what happens!