This is an amazing story. Was glued from the start. Beautifully written angst and whump, excellent character development. Wholeheartedly recommend.

Long time now since you wrote this, but I just found it and wanted to say how much I enjoyed it, and your other fics. Have read your stories over and over. If you're still out there and writing, please carry on! Your fics are emotional and beautifully written and do the guys proud.

Is there a sequal

Just discovering these stories, y love of Thunderbirds rekindling with the new series. Love this story, by chapter 7 I was in tear, thinking "no not Virgil", would have stopped reading them but cheated and checked out chapter 10, then happily went back and continued reading.
Oved how you portrayed the boys. Hope to see more from you, good writers !ake me cry

Awesome story - I would've loved the action to be included in the story, and not told as just a rehash (Virgil being hurt in the mudslide) but this was a very good, well-written story.

I would recommend a beta tho - just to avoid any spelling errors. I'm not usually one to pick on spelling, however I noticed that every single 'where' and 'were' were always in the wrong place; just to set you straight tho, 'where' pronounced (w-AIR) is usually when you are looking for something; 'were' pronounced (w-ER) is almost a past tense, used around adjectives.. eg.'The Tracey boys were different...'(This ones a bit harder to explain tho, so look it up!) :-)

Also be wary of your 'accept' and 'except' - 'accept' is to approve; say yes to; 'except' is to single out; eg.'Off with their heads - all except this one...'

I'm sure they were just harmless mistakes, but I just wanted to be sure you were aware, so please don't take me the wrong way.

I really thought this was a fantastic story - I could see a good sequel coming our way too! (Please add more John tho! He was a bit left out in this one.) hehe.

Awesome stuff! I'm gonna go see what other T'bird stories you have! :-)

'till next time...

i've realised that my review wasn't quite...right. I meant to write more but got distracted so here's another go.

the more chapters the merrier and I say that this storie should (in theory) be excrutiatingly merry...of course if it was then it wouldn't be angst...and I'm rambling.

Let me just say congratulations on such a fab story and is there going to be a sequal when Virgil finds a new girlfriend who doesn't die? i hope so.

Great story. Please write a follow-up. I'd love to hear more about Gordon and Jamie (I sensed there could be a story to tell about them), as well as more about Scott and Virgil. Love their relationship. I'm still hoping Jeff finds out about Virgil and Anna. I wonder what his reaction will be?

Bravo! Encore, Encore!

id like to congratulate you on a great story, it was so filled with emotion that it hits the reader and draws them in. id love to see a sequel to this, so i hope you give your reviewers what you want! im just sorry i didnt find it earlier, although i may have been exceedingly upset at having to wait to find out if Virgil had actually died! hoping to read more of your work soon.

the more chapters the merrier!

Awesome story ! you did really a good job on it :D please conucate writing these storys ;) and let's hope that i'll see you next time cya

That was lovely! Tears in my eyes, again!

Would have liked Jeff and Virge to have talked about Anna but i loved the way you ended it. Kinda wish i had that kind of relationship wiv my brother.

And thanks for discussing the major Gordon reaction in this chapter.

Awaiting your next masterpiece.

Jo

You know this was a very nice story. Very in depth and thoughtful. My congratulations on how you portrayed the multitude of emotions which must have been flowing throughout. I hope you write more soon.

Yours

mcj

Absolutely beautiful, so well written and touching and just aw! This is just begging for a sequel and I truly hope you'll give in to your adoring public and provide one! Well done, brilliant work, you should be very proud of this!

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i see a sequal. Virgil fonally telling jeff about his past love. Great story looking forwsard to other works