This has been a very interesting fic. I like your writing style, and I hope to find out what happens between Irvine and Squall at some point in the near future... Personally, I'm rooting for them.

Considering this fic was posted in one year, then updated seven years later, I'm praying for an update.

Hope to see a new chapter soon.

Reed

So, it's been over a year and I see this hasn't been updated. PLEASE continue it! I need more!

So you probably should update this. :D

whew just read 28 chapters in one go

reli like your style, the swapping povs each chapter is reli cool

love how the irvysqually relationship is coming along, i just totally love that pairing and i reli hope they end up together in this!

liking how u write rinoa - i dont like her...

anyway, please update soon

and can u put in some more irvysqually loveliness

xx

I like the style... and I think that Squall should just get smothered by Irvine's kisses already! wel not that soon at least

Nice to see more on this story.

M... I'll be fine with the pairings but please, please, please.. no SEifer/Zell!

That pairing makes me wanna lose my lunch. *shudders in distaste*

Interesting... will this be a Seifer/Squall or a Irvine/Squall?

Can't wait for more.

Interesting! Please continue!

Nice story though im a little confused as to who is actually sleeping with/going out with who? May just be me being thick!