I like the ending. But I am no sure about Grissom questioning why Sara would allow him to do what he did to her. To me it sounded awfully like an abuser shifted the blame to the victim. The victim allowed how she was treated. A rather dark Grissom through out the chapters; but a very interesting take on this man.

Is a physiologist gonna do any good for Grissom?

Good for Sara to take a stand. She wasn't something to be kept by anybody. She's her own person.

Why did LH even get into the bed in the first place? Not very convincing here.

Someone needs help here. Big time.

Oh, the dark side of Grissom finally came to the surface. (Still, I am not sure, though. Did he go to LH for sex before he and Sara went steady?) Now he's showing every intention to mark Sara his. Was it a mask for his own insecurity? Shouldn't LH has it "cured" by now?

Sara sure knew how to push Grissom's buttons...

I really like your Catherine here. She was kind of bitchy and not very nice towards Sara from the early episodes. Glad she actually spoke up for Sara. Can't wait to find out how her "conversation" with Grissom would be like.

Not sure about Grissom, either. Casual dating? Was he implying LH was one of his casual dates, too?

I don't know about LH here; she sounded like, well, trying to be coy. What was exactly going on between Grissom and her? Can't trust this woman with the whip. I don't see why he'd get upset over the fact that Sara went to see LH. She did need to know what LH was to Grissom. She did need to know if he was playing around.

Another story that touches the heart...

that went from scary to great. i am glad he got help and learned to deal. but baby makes three! great job!

please, update soon! This is great!

Aw...that was so sweet! More soon please.

great story, though i think you could do better with your grammar checks