I very much love this story! It gave me many giggles :)

I wish the kiss in the lake was real but probably isn't.

3rd time reading. Still great :-)

SWEET!

interesting

Nice story.

Can I just say... AMAZING. Your characterisation was so fantastic that I could as everything happening like it was an episode. Well done :)

nice

I enjoyed this story very much.

Your sense of humor is perfect for these characters and their voices. Particularly Jack's inability to phrase a sentence clearly, however amusing. Sam's friendship!moment's with Daniel on the mission were really great as well.

The ending feels a little unresolved, but in a good way (by that I think I mean I wish there was an easier way with these two, not like you gave it a bad ending).

Overall think it accomplished it's purpose (humor & fun relationship moments, if that was your intention.) and the matter it set out to settle. And I'm pretty sure I burst out laughing more than once.

Cool story :) Characterisations are good.

Evil writer. I'm a romantic at heart so I like to have them together at the end of stories. That is just me. I did enjoy the story though it was well written. Any of your stories that you would recommend?

Kelli

That was defiantly evil and if this is your worst story I may have to look up the others. I don't know when I will have the time but I will review when I read them. I'm an author who likes to receive reviews so I try to give them as well.

Keep writing you're doing a good job.

Kelli

That was a good chapter I enjoyed that one. On to the next one.

Kelli

That was mean nasty and evil but I admit I would have done the same thing.

Kelli

Well that was interesting. I'm still here and still reading. On to the next chapter.

Kelli