Reviews for The Spoiled Sun
Lola chapter 8 . 1/28/2017
Oh my gosh that was heartbreaking. I have never read anything like this...
Guest chapter 8 . 1/9/2017
So beautiful!
AI chapter 8 . 6/30/2015
The quiet, almost meditative quality of this story. Great stuff. Thanks for sharing!
Sarah chapter 8 . 2/2/2014
Wow! An amazing fic. Absolutely heartbreaking. Crying my eyes out now. A beautiful piece of work. Well done.
BladedBlossom chapter 3 . 10/25/2012
This isn't really a review. I'm still reading this, but just wanted to say I always thought if Anakin was to be trained successfully, both Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan had to live. I never could believe that Qui-Gon could move on as before if Obi-Wan had fallen to the Sith, and of course, with Qui-Gon's death, I'm certain a part of Obi-Wan died. It was those two as a team that lent each other amazing strength and resilience, and so the same could not really be achieved with Anakin. Good to see a fic addressing possible problems with Qui-Gon training Anakin, because I'm sure Anakin isn't as forgiving or observant to subtleties as Obi-Wan. Would be a case of the blind leading the blind.
StarRose85 chapter 8 . 8/14/2010
Please do a Sequel Where there Sacrifice Is worth it Your story is so moving that I cannot bear the thought of them staying in that much pain . Well done :-)
SongoftheDarquePhoenix chapter 8 . 5/25/2009
While not being what I expected, this fic is verry good. Your descriptions paint pictures, and the story is heartfelt. Throughout reading this a melancholy feel lies within, reminding you that happy endings are part of fairy tales, and fairy tales don't always come true.
Thee-Unknown-Factor chapter 8 . 4/1/2009
WHAT? That's the ending?
Majestik Moose chapter 8 . 6/15/2008
I blame you for stealing my idea...even though you wrote this in 2004/2005 and I've only just begun mine...

Ack. I swear, yours is the definition of heartbreaking. Mine isn't even complete and it's the definition of horrid. XD

But really. To imagine Obi-Wan like this, it's terrible. Poor Qui-Gon. I feel bad for the guy.

This is possibly my favorite story on this site :D
Valairy Scot chapter 8 . 11/10/2006
Just...heartbreaking perfection.
Nelarun chapter 8 . 3/12/2006
very sweet, if a little sad, but it is good...

Nelarun of Australia
Angel5000 chapter 8 . 6/25/2005
Wow! Words can't express how good this was. Had me crying by the end. Absolutely amazing work! I love your stories and this was just extraordinary, as usual!
Princess-Arulmozhi chapter 8 . 5/7/2005
That was so sad...:-( . Even if I'm glad you didn't kill Obi :-) But still, to have him like this...ah, breaks my heart. :-((

Brilliant, as usual, LE :D
RaeAngel chapter 8 . 5/6/2005
This story is one of the biggest tearjerkers I've ever read! I cried from beginning to end. I love stories that have Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan as the headliners (main characters). Keep up the good work!
ewan's girl chapter 8 . 3/14/2005
I finally finished reading! I'm sorry it took me so long, but my show opened this weekend and I've been so busy. I really enjoyed this story, it was very touching here at the end but also sad in a way. So Obi Wan never recovers? Poor baby...Great job!
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