This is a great story. I hope you finish it someday. I would love to know if Kagome saves Sesshomaru. I also would love to see the confrontation with Naraku. Does Inuyasha get together with Raven? Does Kikyo ever die? So many unanswered questions. Thank you for sharing this story.

Not only is this Shippo spoilt but Kagome encourages it! ugh. And to see the kit who's similar to her brother's age call her "mommy" when she seems more immature than her 15 year old original self doesn't look promising. Sorry I don't quite like your Kagome or Sesshoumaru very much either (K's not that likeable and S's a bit flat as a character) and seeing that your Author Notes "play" of you speaking with different characters at the start and end of the chapter is about as long as the story and kind of bugging so I'm going to stop here.

My suggestion is think up the exact personalities of each character first (eg smart or dumb? spoilt or good kid? stoic and preferring to hide emotions? then can't explain too much, if at all really, and need to be careful of words etc) and let that decide ALL the character's speech and actions.

I really loved the story! It was great. I also loved Kagome's change, that was sure interesting. Love the story line. Wish it was a longer fanfic though lol good job.

It was great but you should continue I loved it :-)

So cute and funny I loved it :-)

Don't be embrass kagome it's normal but anyway kikyo and haruka should have died I'm mad but you are forgiven :-)

That what she get messing with my girl! I loved it :-) it was funny :-)

Oh kagome got beef with some women this is not good... but whatever she can handle it anyway I loved it :-) it was somewhat funny and no shippo and rin better be ok:-)

I lovd it and yay koga and man I love her sisters and sango counts to anyway I loved it:-)

That so cute the ending and her sisters seem fun and I bet inuyasha left then will probably come back :-) he a jerk :-) but I loved it :-)

Inuyasha is so fucking rude after everything he did they still let you come and be rude he sucks and where is the dead clay women?! :-) anyway I loved it:-)

I loved it and that what inuyasha get for wanting a dead woman but it was awesome and kill kikyo kagome :-)

Kikyo buggin man and so is inuyasha! But I loved it :-) it was cute:-)

Awesome but I loved it and nooooo how can you stop putting shippo in?! But whatever I loved it :-)

I loved it it was so sweet :-)