So Ash's father is named Neil and he was an undercover police officer. I wonder who the turncoat was for the police. A double funeral. That's so sad.

please continue this

this is a great story.

it great that Gary and Ash r best buds in this fic.

the story lines great and i can't wait till u update.

ur a great writer and the way u made the characters talk to each other in the story its really good and funny. like the part when Ash and Gary went to the grave yard for the first time and the comments Gary made. i really liked that chapter.

anyway keep it up and plz update soon

catch ya later!

Great story. Your right the part in the begining with the ghost of the father did remind me a whole lot of Hamlet. I also noticed some lines from you other story Midsummer Nights uses here ("Chosen For What VCR Programing", "Chu are so mean!" and I know there are others) I really like the story line and its nice to see Gary protrayed in a better light then he is in MNights. I'm really looking forward to new chapters from both MNights and Nemesis. Keep up the excellent work, and i'll keep on reading.

P.S. If you ever need a beta reader let me know i'd be more than happy :)

Boy, I can only imagine Ash’s shock at finding out that a group he was able to fight off was responsible for his father’s death… I can understand where he’s coming from with not being sure if he should believe him. Talking to Prof. Oak is most likely the best idea. XD Muk cracks me up! HAHA Way to jump in there, Gary, with the Giovanni question. :P Oh interesting that Prof. Oak senses something wrong about Giovanni. They’re just regular PI detectives, aren’t they. O.o Aww Neil’s boss is nice… mystery about that key though… XD I can just imagine the look on Ash’s face recalling those memories as Edward said the Rockets were dangerous. Aww I how close Ash feels to his mother. . I like Ash’s reasoning for not using a Pokemon, too. So like him. :P Aww I want to eat at the Ketchums’ house! Oh Delia’s sharp—and a pretty sharp cover for Ash to come up with, too. AWW Past Ash and Gary moments! Cute! Wow, how did he expect the police to find that key? O.o Aww Scruffy! Does this make him a Fire and Ghost type now? :P I’m glad that tree wasn’t chopped down! And who better to dig than a Sandshrew? Well, except maybe Diglett… but Sandshrew’s cuter. :P Scruffy… Interesting password… :P HAHA Ash and Gary bickering! Just like old times. XD Come on, Ash, you can do it! *gasp* I smell adventure! But I wouldn’t tell Misty either. :P You can do it, guys!

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I had hoped you would update this again. This story is pretty deep and intriguing. (pretty sure i spelled that wrong) Anyways, i look forward to the next installment.

just curious if there is more to the fact that you genred it as supernatural then ghosts. I like ghosts! Very good describs and awsome work on the way they go through to decide.

Well, that was interesting. do not delete!

damn. i must say that i don't think i've ever seen a fic like this. some were close, but they weren't quite here. great job! this story is very well portrayed, and very well done. i've always felt the best kinds of stories were ones with humor, action, angst or drama, and a little romance on the side, and this fic has all that. i do hope you update soon!

XD Ash and Pik crack me up! Such a wonderful companionship. - *gasp* His Dad? That would so freak me out too if I were him... aaiiee Tracey! XD Mr. Scientific. :P Most times I'd agree with him, except in this case Ash is right; none of the circumstances that bring about apparitions were there. This is the real deal! XD Silly Gary, Ash is just Ash. :P HAHA I wouldn't tell either-I'd be afraid she would get mad at me for not telling sooner! I still like that prophecy. If it hadn't been so obvious, it would have been clever. XD Well it still is. Anyway, Gary is being such a smart alec. XD Oh, go Tracey, straighten that boy out! :P I love they way they talk. You can tell they're all good friends with such teasing. XD Maiden's Peak! Oy Gary... Ash's mom? XD! Stepfather Brock! *dies* I love it. XD

Oh, over to Saffron! Sabrina should know a bit about what's going on. HAHA GENGAR! I love him! I loved that episode so much-I'd almost forgotten about it. I like how you gave them an afterstory here now. . Wow, he doesn't even have to tell her what's going on. O.o "He wondered if there wasn’t anything about him that she didn’t know. Which was rather disturbing."-XD! Makes me wonder. :P Hmm, now to figure out what his father wanted... she has a point about him perhaps wanting to say something he wouldn't have understood when she was younger... XD I like Haunter's reasoning about ghosts best. :P MAN she is good. Ash was so smart to go to her. XD

HAHAHA Nighttime cemetery visit. Not creepy at all. :P I don't blame Misty for not wanting to go, though I'm sure she and I would have different reasons. “Sounds like a perfectly normal Friday night thing to do.”-XD! Wow, if only it were that easy to make any ghost appear. *ponders* Aww, Ash... I wonder if he expected it to be so emotional... *reads on* Well, I guess not. ; Oh ghost chat! I'll bet THAT'S surreal. Poor Gary. XD Woo now they learn the real story! Every time I hear the story about the baby Kangaskhan I get so upset. :( Team Rocket is horrid! And they could have been stopped if only for that traitor... *growls*

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Sweet! Giovanni's gonna get beat down!

Uh oh! Looks like someone is in trouble! Giovanni better get going while the going's good!

Wow... how cool

You're still throwin stuff up here eh? Awesome-I was hoping to find a good story now! Great start! On to ch. 2. . .

Hehehehe, I'm liking I'm liking :) good job so far! I wanna know what's going to happen next.