NOOOOOOO I MUST READ THIS TO COMPLETION!

Great story so far.

( Im so sad that this story hadnt continue

This is a great story I hope you comeback and finish it this story is great and I really hope to see a ending to it

i have been patiently waiting for one of my fav storys to update for two years plz update soon i am begging you if you are not going to continue plz tell me

HEY DUDE this IS A GREAT STORY SO DONT Just Keep on Hold UPDATE it FOR NEXT CHAPTER SO UPDATE

Awesome fic. Its great. I was never so faszinated with a Fanfic before. Althought you habe a lot of new characters in this fic, i like them all. I think Erynn is a great character. I am very curious in which way this fic will go. Respect to you.

Please Update soon.

Very sad.

Hey, its pretty good there. "Ein." -snickers knowing your real name.-

anywho...

Love it.. keep it up. I hope to read more of it soon.

wow so good come back and finish it some day

Very good story. Painfully long times between chapters, understandable though. (who am I to talk though? I havn't updated in over 2 years.)

I like the shifting between Keitaro and the residents of Hinata, great way of keeping everything in perspective.

keep on typing

Yo man the story rulls and good luck at college

the story is fantastic. i hope that next update will be longer cuz ur story is awesome.

I just read the whole thing and it took me nearly three hours but I read it. Im tired and knackered but it was worth it. Damn its a good fic and I hope you do finish it. I really do hope you finish it. Its so refreshing to read a fic on something that hasnt been explored to my knowledge. More please and hurry it up man. I need my fix

Awesome fic man! Keep up the great work!

Smell Ya' Later!