You should continue this story. I found it creative and interesting. There aren't that many stories that can continue to grab the reader's attention, this one did! :)

Great story! So tender and sweet! Please keep writing!

I loved the story! I am such a sucker for romance! I liked the change...Amanda kissing Lee, usually it is the other way around.

Very sweet. one thing. you didn't say when it was set, but you were right, no matter what, a little off canon. Good characterization, and backround setting. Also, I found it very easy to follow. Keep writing these, you're doing a great job.

Very nicely done. My heart is still fluttering!

As part of the Society for the Hopeless Romantic, (President, nonetheless) I can say, "Awwwwwww!" without feeling guilty: Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! How cute! I can just see Lee, "gently dismissing the clinging appendage attached to his other arm." LOL! EEEEE! So sweet! Keep writing! )

Wonderful! (And I love the song as well.) This story is funny and romantic, so it is the best kind to read.

Aahhhh. I'm hanging here. When do we get to read "Step Two?"

*trying to cool down* That was great! My heart is still trying to return to normal. Sigh. No gush or mush either. I like that. Later...

That is *IT*? oh goodness it was good, but I sure could do with some more

That was very nice! *SPOILER* And I must admit to laughing out loud at the description of Elizabeth as a 'clinging appendage attached to his other arm'. Wonderful!

Great story, but I can't believe you left me hanging like that. Very romantic.

I'm glad they both meant it like that! I liked they way Lee gave the piranah the brush off! Thanks for writing this romantic story!

That was cute! I really liked that. Keep up the good work! :o)

This was sweet. Keep up the great work.