Hey, I like your story so far. I think I will enjoy it in the coming chapters.

You wanted to know about Boba Fett's ship. As big Boba Fett fan I will tell you all I know about it: Boba Fett's ship is called SLAVE I. SLAVE I is a Firespray-class starship. It was one of 6 prototypes designed by Kuat Systems Engineering for Oove IV security forces. All but one of these prototypes were dystroyed when Jango Fett staged a prison break. He kept the remaining prototype renaming it SLAVE I. When Boba escaped from the Sarllac (S.W. ep. 3 Return of the Jedi) he found that SLAVE I was impounded so he got another ship naming it Slave II. I believe that he had a SLAVE I, IV, and V, all Firespray class starships, but they did not look like SLAVE I we have come to know and love, until he was able to retrieve SLAVE I. Then he was back in buisness. SLAVE I weapons include twin balster cannons, two rapid-fire laser cannons , two projectile launchers (each equipped with a magazine of three proton torpedos and various other payloads, naval mine-layer equipped with 3 seismic charges.)

I can't really help you with name ideas for Kara's ship. I am totally clueless when it comes to that. Can't wait for your upcoming chapters!

-Jai Akari

Kara: Nice story. You might want to add lots of violence, alcholol, drugs, infidelity, and, well, you know, all the nice gory stuff...KIDDING! Don't make me write a Disclaimer too...try putting (seriouly) some more detail about why Vertex's son was kiddnapped...? But I would not know, AMAZING story, keep up the good work, (I was going to ask if somehow you could fit Darth Maul in the story, but...)

C'est la vete' (and TGIF!) -Pizza

Really good plot you have going, but I'd like to see you make the ending more dramatic and final when you end the chapter. GJ though, I hope you keep it up!

We decided to use the Splendidiser to modify your intro. ( just a little bit! )

If you would like to use this shreekworthly dashing web site, feel free. lol It is simply Splendid!

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Star Wars

The shriekworthy Biggest Bounty

A blasted long time ago,

In a simply dashing galaxy far, far away...

It is shamingly finally a simply splendid time of peace, which is frightfully just too bogus!

The simply dandy evil Empire has all but been destroyed, my dear fellow!

But a frightful Bounty Hunters work is terribly never done. Splendid!

A spiffing young girl named Kara Adar is asked to take fabulously on a jolly job

By a dratted mysterious man who calls himself Vertex. It's so damned unfair!

At first Kara thinks the priceless job really will be fairly rutine,

Until the blasted gal finds out that the splendid filly has to work with the simply bogus most feared

Bounty Hunter in the simply dashing entire galaxy, Boba Fett. Golly!

The two Hunters are unbearably both used to being alone,

But they must learn to work together to achieve there goal,

And collect the biggest bounty each has ever seen. Oh my!

Can they learn to work together before it’s too late?

Only time will tell, if they can learn to work together

And collect...

The frightful Biggest Bounty

ooh! this is good! i hope you update soon! thanks so much for the reviews on FLOC. on Kara's ship...i dunno, how about the Tenacious Wolf

Hmm.. so far so good... My only recommendation would be to watch the description. Sometimes it tends to get caught in a clump, like when you introduce us to your character Kara Adar in the last chapter.

But that's minor, and I'm just trying to be constructive as per your request in chapter 1 so please don't think I'm being mean! Overall I like really your start on this one and hope you update soon!

LOL! I love the beginning, and I'm very impressed with your ability to force to cooperate on the formatting. *applauds* Well time to go read the fic now... Always such a wonderful feeling to find new Fett fics...

Hey Kara.

DArk BLue? you made his cloths dark blue? Crazy waky colored Kara? Dude, When i doubt, pick purple! ( or orange, or yellow, something VERY bright! :-) ) And for a name, You've allready herd my idears. but, Marauder. lol :-) i wonder where that idear came from. * grins *

Great work. Have you thought of a plot yet? or are yous till on the make-as-you-go menthod. :-) ( i love those kinds, allways VERY interesting. ) So, as always.

WRITE MORE!

Love,

~Midi

Interesting Chapter, no big action yet though so keep updating! And don't worry about putting Slave I, There aren't any Fett stories I've found when the Empire is destroyed so feel free to experiment. If you need any Fett information I'd love to help! Update soon!

Cool! I LOVE BOBA FETT!

I can't wait til we find out a bit more about Kara!

SD04

NO, seriously Kara. Great Work. When are you going to post the rest? I see you decided to keep your ship ' the wish ' Thought you wanted to change that. Didn't you? Well. anyways, as allways... ... ... ... WRITE MORE! * grins *

Love,

Your freind,

Midi

ha ha ha ha, Hey Kara! As you know we're too lazy to get our account, so we're using yours! WE are so deliciously evil! WHahahaha. lol

But anyways, good story, I wonder what happens next, ( like a don't allready know ) :-) But you have post the rest of it for Briar. Becouse you don't read me your stories. ( cause your to busy listenig to me read you mine ) lol

Your sincerly,

Midnight Solo

&

Briar Rose / Resa

Okay, you really really need to keep writing this. I've been waiting for a good Fett fic and Kara sounds so awesome. Very well written, and I like how you depict the characters. Write Soon!