Ah I love this story. It's really emotional (chap 4 had me crying) and beautiful. It's so perfect!

Very intense, keep it up

Please not let pride be the last chapter!

nice! i can't wait to read more installations!

You always go to the most interesting of places with your work. I, as always, can't wait to see what you do next. Cheers.

AH! So adorable! Lol Very nice. And yes, Trance getting added in was good. She's so darn... adroable. There's no other word for it! Lol Too innocent, although there was that one episode where she was a prisoner and she scared me with how evil she really was to mean people. Lol Very nice story! *Glomps Harper* Too bad he didn't get a bigger part, but that's okay. B/Rh will satisfy me!

~ V.

They all seem well in character for this season. Love how you show how "innocent" Trance is now nad her loss of memory. Also her bond with Dylan. Love that Rhade still WANTS to drink. Very realistic. But YEA! he doesn't give in! And catching that asprin, without even really looking, GREAT! Good way to show his being on the path to recovery. Poor Doyle, not understanding the game. It's a GAME Doyle, it's suppose to be fun, not logical . . . ;-) Great chapter.

That was really good, besides the overall coolness of the story it had kind of a real feel to it. Like, you can tell Rhade is getting better but he isn't exactly on Happy Fun-time Rainbow Road.

Yet.

Very cool! Definatly lighter, but no where near fluffy. It was nice though, and I like the team interaction. Very cool.

Yay! Rhade caught an aspirin pill! whoa, that was a sentece i never thought id say. trance is so cute in this chapter. this chapter was a lot lighter than its predesessor, which is nice. im in an uncharacteristicly light mood. wow, uncharacteristicly is a really long word...

Very dispointed to find no next chapter button at the end. I hope this matter will be rectified soon ;) Anyway I love this story so much I've read it a exisle too.

That was just incredible! I loved the detail. Especially Trance at the end. I cannot wait to see more from you.

This is such a wonderful story, I love it with a passion!

I love the way you write Rhade and Beka, I can just see them doing and saying what you write in my mind.

Bravo! We know the old Rhade is on the way back. Now he knows it, too. Well done.

Hehe...fantastic imagery, great detail. I'm glad you snuck Trance in, made the chapter all the more entertaining (not that it wouldn't have done justice on its own!). And I certainly enjoyed the shippy aspect...hmm, maybe a little fluff in there as well, and I'm all for that! Great to see a new chapter up, hope you'll the ink flowing! :-