I like the plot of the story. It's very freshening and tempt your curiousity how the next chapter becomes. It started with sesshomaru as a businessman and how kagome fits in the world of businesss and along with the chapter goes the story become more interesting. Oh how i love it when sesshomaru got the wrong assumption. It's different, in a good way of course, than any other sesskag stories. But the transition of POV was confusing. It will be easier if you give the sign like ~*~ or anything in every transition of POV. And the characterization in each character were lacking. You don't tell how kagome overcomes her past with inuyasha and how sesshomaru found kagome and inuyasha's past which can influence the kagome and sesshomaru's relationship. You kind of rushed the ending of the story which become unsatisfying. It will be better if you build the growth of the character no matter how simple it is than let it just pass. Keep writing!

Bland...need some action

Despues de leer esta historia y esperar que ocurra algo me quede con las ganas el final
fue desastroso

Cristina pacheco

wonderful story loved it

No.

Not.. Not even one kiss? D:

I find this entertaining... hope that's what you were going for.

No...it's-it's not done! They haven't even kissed yet! NOOOOOOOOO! Please *Sniff* Please write a sequel *Puppy dog eyes* I loved this too much for it to end already!

What a love story... it started with an f'd up stapler aand ended with a broken stapler... That sounds wronn somehow... Anyway her vocabulary sounds like me yelling at some of my friends...hmmm. Good job, though there are some spelling mistakes, you're a quite wonderful writer. My favorite part was the begining and the drunk parts. I also like how Sesshomaru manipulated his thoughts to where he denied his own infatuation to her by saying she would be a fun, new toy;[you know BEFORE she punched him in the stomache...]!

Overall, Loved it!

sorry I ramble when I'm tired..and it's 3:48am...so good night!

Wow, this was a crazy story... But in a good way. :) some of the stuff she pulled I occasionally thought was over-the-top, but I still enjoyed it :) thx for the read.

very cute but could have been longer lol.

wonderful!

that was awesome! i loved it! u did a good job! u kno, u should definitly make a sequel!

You should seriously do a sequel to this! I'm certain a lot of ppl would agree!

I've enjoyed your story. It definitely made me chuckle at times. Now all you need to do is to write a sequel to this!