Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

What a wonderful and beautiful retelling of an amazing game.

Great job, it was really good. Great humor with Yorda. LOL. I really liked this and lea, you did really great. :)

Aw, this story is so good - but you appear to have left out a big plot-point: that the monsters that Ico is fighting are actually all his horned kin.

This was a pretty good novelisation, I'd say. Though I think it could use some work...

Mainly, you make it rather boring, describing all the puzzles and stuff. And it's rather confusing; if you haven't played the game (and sometimes even if you have) you won't have a clue as to what's going on. But other than that, this was really good. I like how you added more times where they talk to each other, and the whole thing about how they communicate.

Anyway, good job! I was pleased to see that you're not like some -cough-Game Informer-cough- and don't wait until after the credits roll to see the REAL ending. Keep writing! _

Wow that was wonderful. it was almost like reliveing the entire game again. You did a very good job.

Love the story so far. Will continue ready the rest of it tommorrow. It is quite late rightnow so I have to go to bed.

Yay!

You are the MAN or WOMENN!(Sorry but I dont know) You are the first person to write the whole story! I congratulat you. PLease write some more of what you think what happend next or any other stories!

I love your writing style. This is an awesome game and you manage to describe it so well. I'm excited to read the rest of it.