I wish that it hadn't had dirty words but you got the point across that God all but waves a sign in front of us and we still don't pay attention.

I love how his voice is described. My favorite part is "Jesus was laughing at me. Life was good."

That was amusing.

That was really a very good story. You described the character's feelings very well and also succeeded in transferring the atmosphere of your work onto your reader's mood.

Thanx for brightening my day up! :-)

That was really cool! I liked it! For some reason, the character reminded me of Roger from the play Rent. awesome job here!

For having a bible story, I'm not sure it's appropriate to use swearing (though I know it does fit the character). I would like to mention how creative your one-shot is. _ It flows well and you set up the person and place very well. Great job!

As for me, I doubt I would be able to get a sound out if He was on the other line.

Interesting concept. I liked the description in Jesus' voice & found the thought of being able to 'call' Heaven fascinating. It made me stop & think a minute & that's good in a story. Thanks.

Diana

Great story!

That was a terrific story! One of the best stories I have read._

Yea, it's really beautiful. That He knows everything you need. All you need to do is ask. Don't need a payphone or nothing. )

loved it! i wish i could call Jesus sometimes!

That was really cool! Keep writing.

NICE! that's different than what i had expected.

This is the BEST Story that i've ever READ! I am also a christian and i was feeling rather down until i read your fic. Now i feel that everything is okay and feel reassured even more about God through reading your fic.
I was attacked by a demon once a little after i became a christian and i knew that it was God who saved me. So i will believe in him forever. Continue writing, you are a GIFT from GOD!

now this one, Megan, is very beautiful. I like it. Cute too. :)