That may be what will happen if they are stuck in a room, each...

I like the part about Goku... :D

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. The characterization was excellent, and the way that you wrote it was just...wonderful. Dark, and I believe that they would think like this.

You did a great job at handling Sanzo. Any emotion would be met with denial, but it would still be there.

Excellent piece.

Raven

I believe praise is in order here. An amazingly done introspection into each of their characters!

That was very good. If I thought I could get away with repeating very half a million times, I would. So dark and delicious. I loved the end to a million pieces, and how none of them thought of each other. If this is the outcome of writing on whim, please do so more often.

i have read this before and never left a review. this is quite an original insightful piece. heart rending and thought provoking. and brilliant.

Wow, dark indeed. Sad, but hauntingly real. I like the contrast you portray.

Woah. That was... Scary. No, really. In a haunting sort of way. And sad. Very deep. I love it.

hurm...overall, I think its a nice story, though i dont understand part of it

This story was... fascinating is the best word I suppose. An unusual yet completely plausable look at how each of them would react to the given scenario. You've put a lot of thought into each character's personality and motivations, which gives each line a sincerity that's lovely to see. As I say, I found it fascinating...

Until the very end, when it broke me. It was completely unexpected, perfectly justified, and unbearably sad. But only sad to those of us who continue on. Somehow you've managed convey the idea that the people involved were at peace with the same fact that breaks my own heart.

And astonishingly original story.