Awesome story! Glad you decided to keep writing it, your doing it cool. It looks like things are picking up now, I'm exited for the next chapters! Keep strong and inspired!

That's right! Good job! Don't let stupid flames get you down!

Ok, 1 I really like this series. 2 they are called fanfic for a reason. I think thank I was a very cool way to go about this series. Though it is sad that there is no more to read because you don't a few dummy comments. I honestly really would love for to read. such as the final defeat of Naraku. Though it is your story I would love to hear more of it.

WTF HOW ARE INUYASHA AND KIKYO HIS PARENTS?! KAGOME GAVE BIRTH TO HIM

Wow Miyori is harsh! At the moment my fav is Tsuin

I dont like Koinu's attitude, it makes me wanna punch him

Omg its getting exciting

hi im really into the pairing and inuyasha I love your writing style its so raw and inspiring o writers just starting out and I can tell you put a lot of work into this fanfic and honestly its an amazing story with a lot of interesting twists if you ever need any ideas or anything or just wanna run an idea through someone you can email me at I am also a writer I have 2 fanfics one has been left unfinished and the other I have run dry on inspiration and been busy with many other things so maybe I could run some things by you too if youd be willing to help me with my story well thank you.

I loved it. I love cliff hangers too! :)

Hello there! Just so you know about the your note regarding kagome's eyes, it is really blue. It is on manga! It i inly brown in anime. So before noting something, better seqrch for it first. Just a friendly advise ;)

...You are frustrating me with all these cliffhangers! Mouu!

i love how the stoyr was going and how you left it haning for a 3rd part.. i really love baby blue and this one in till you gave up on it... in will next time

angel

I LOVED THIS WHOLE STORY AND I NEVER WANT IT TO END, SO PLEASE IF AT ALL POSSIBLE CONTINUE THE STORY, IF YOU ARE REALLY HAVING TROUBLE WRITING A CONTINUATION THEN JUST WRITE WHATEVER COMES TO MIND SOMEWHERE AND MAKE SENSE OF IT LATER, THEN POST IT, YOUR FANS LOVE WHAT YOU WRITE AND IF THEY DON'T LIKE YOUR IDEAS THEN SCREW THEM, I HATE WHEN PEOPLE STOP AT A TO BIG CLIFF HANGER SO PLEASE MAKE THE STORY CONTINUE. IF YOU CAN NOT THINK OF IDEAS THEN ASK YOUR FANS FOR IDEAS AND PICK OUT THE ONES YOU LIKE AND CONTINUE ON, IF YOU LIKE THEM THEN THE PEOPLE THAT LOVE YOUR STORY LIKE ME WILL LOVE THEM.
Oh and P.S. If you have not realized it then you probably have not been paying attention but Kagome and Sesshomaru still love each other but are not sure about the other person so that is some thing you could work with and I really want that relationship to have a happy ending and not a total cliff hanger ending where the reader can not continue the story in their own imagination and I actually really love the way that you wrote Sesshomaru, you may not love it but I do and if this story was an actual manga then I would buy every single volume and I am sure at least 75% of your fans would too, so don't give up, the story is still out there you just have to let it flow.
And P.P.S. I am really sorry if the all caps at first seemed like I was mad at you, I just know that this is a great story and needs a complete, or at least not to cliff hanger like, ending, and I really love this story and want you to write what you think is good and not care what anyone else thinks, this is the best damn fan fiction that i have ever read an I know that thousands of other people would agree with me, so never give up on a story until no matter what, even if you think you can't write it any more, there are people in the world that will read it and love it but might not get the chance to love it if you give up on it, so even if you have doubts about your writing, try and continue because even if you like it but don't love it and have doubts, there are other people who will love it and want to read more of your work.

r you going to make a sequel to this one i think u shuld :)

why would he do tht!