OOOMFG i know i always say i love it, but this one really is my favorite. And i think this is the best James one shot I've ever read 3 3

in 700 words, you've succeeded where an entire series failed- you have actually introduced some character development to james potter. kudos!

I do really like this. Very honest.

So sweet. But (wait for it), it's a sad sweetness. Bittersweet (please cyber-smack me next time I say that) and painful, it's a brutally honest peek inside someone's head.

Well written.

Luna

Hm, I've never seen James as a musician. I think that, instead of a piano and music, he'd go to his friends for solace, most specifically Sirius. I've always seen him as a good listener.

That's so sad. I really like it, though. I absolutely love Lily/James, and playing the piano. So glad it didn't end up that way.

It was beautiful, simply amazing, the way you get the point across is . . . undescribable, if anything is spelled wrong please excuse me. I've never read anything like this before, it was . . . undescribablely invigorating. This will be going on my favorites list, your a very taltnted writer you know, I hope to see more or your work, excellent job love.

Hey! Your first chapter's nice! I play the piano, so i can totally relate to what you said about music. Basically, I love the piano. Do you play the piano? Anyway, great chapter, update soon!

Oh. That was beautiful! Just beautifully written. Sweet and emotional. You have a wonderfully splendiforous (did I spell that right? is that even a word?) writing smile. Made me smile. Angsty but sweet and compassionate. I loved it! Keep writing.

I love it. It's really well written something I wish I could write. Keep up the good work.

RANDOM!

I think you made James deeper than he is in canon. The ideas were nice, but realistically speaking I don't think James was that ..romantic.

-paradox

really beautiful and very touching. an alternate ending could be: You'll fade away like every other aspect of this life. I will come to wonder if it ever existed. No matter how much i love you, in the end you'll wilt away like the musical notes of my piano.

my point being the word everything could be replaced with a more discriptive word and i heard u shouldn't start sentences with a pronoun. also it makes for fuller writing to use synonums.

i loved your piece, you really put your heart into your writing and it shows. you have a real gift. use it wisely.

I loved it. Very well-written, very sad. Oh, well, least we know there's a happy ending in there somewhere. There are not many stories that make James multilayered quite like this one does.

Ooh. Sext, sensitive, piano-playing Jamiekins. I swear to God, I might just faint. LOVED IT! Argh!

But where's the unrequited love? They get together, right? I personally thought it was a R/L fic. Which I love as well. But this works well too, almost better. Awesome!

Huffah and mad props to you,

ta~

*Austin