Reviews for Shadow Hearts II: Unspoken Intentions
Angelas chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
ah!

Krain/NIcolai are my favorite couple! This fanfiction kicked ass! I can't wait for more stories form you! Please do write more! You rock and keep writing!

-Angelas
lucid-dreamerxo chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
No way! You're not the only Karin x Nicolai supporter in the WHOLE world. I'm right there with ya! Love the fic! Your the best writer ever!
Emire dei Maestri chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
I don't have much time atm, so sorry for making it quite short. Your Fic is fantastic! I love NicolaixKarin and the many other reviews here I have read make me really wonder, why there are so few Fics with this pairing even though there seem to be some supporters.

Aw, I always loved the opening part with Nicolai the most (oh wonder) and it's fun reading about it in this form, with Nicolai's thought and all. I like the way you potrait (Oh dear, is there a past form of that word? I'm not English P) him and I desperatly hope that thsi wasn't your last Fic about him. Geeze, guess I have to read your other SHC-Fics as well, they sound interesting.
Angel-chan2 chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
Yayness! Another Karin/Nicolai supporter! _ I see, like, almost NO Karin/Nicolai pairings on this site! What's up with that? Is that pairing so odd to people? ;_;?

Oh, and I really love how you managed to integrate the game mechanics (the leaves and everything) into the story. I always wondered how people would explain that. (especially with things like monsters dropping random items... It's like a FF7 flash movie I saw, in which the guy was making fun of that concept. He was like: "Yes, I know. I have no idea why these random animals would be carrying 148 Gil and a magic Fire Ring. It will forever be a mystery..." :P)

Anyways, overall, great job! _ I'd like to see more Karin/Nicolai fanfics. _
yumei chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
You are not not the only one who supports this relationship. I think that Nicolai would not have turned evil if he would have gotten a little love and support. But yeah... I think that it could have possibly worked out between the two.

Love always,

Yumei-chan
Parallel-Blue13115 chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
Hey, I'm a Karin X Nicolai fan too! It's really a shame what happens to him though...and that the end has to turn out the way it does...;_; But despite that fact, I hope you keep writing! I'd love to see more of these out there!
Puffy Tribulation chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
Wowie! A Karin x Nicolai fic at last!

Yes, I want the pair so much, I was angry when they have to kill Nicolai, I mean he was one of the reason I continued playing even after getting heartsick (I missed Alice!) in the hope he'll be a reformed character later on, I mean it was hinted that he liked Karin right?

Oh for shame really! Midway and a nice character this time.

I'm glad you wrote this, Nicolai seemed a real nice person, over ambitious perhaps, but nevertheless he seemed to care for Karin.

Kudos!
Stoph Loves Cake chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
Wah! I am also a NicolaixKarin supporter, and not only because I support YurixAlice (together past death!) so heavily.

If only things could've worked out. I was so sad at times. Well, that's what fanfiction is for... if there are fellow supporters out there maybe I could write something here. .
miumiuchuu chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
Nice fanfic! Well, actually i agree with Karin x Nicolai couple. If only it really happens... .
Wh1te Out chapter 1 . 12/23/2004
Wonderfully written. My only comment regarding the grammar is that you may have used a few too many commas at times. There were a few sentences that just ran on for what seemed like forever. But overall, it was very well done.

I like the subtlety of the story and it definitely makes me curious about Nicholai's role as this story progresses. In fact, as I play through the rest of the game for the first time, I may have a different spin on things that are being said. That's never a bad thing. I like the pairing.

I will definitely be reading more of your fics in due time. I don't want to spoil any storyline for myself, though, so I'll take my time. More Karin, that's my last comment. There can never ever be enough fic with Karin as a main character. :)
Karategal chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
Do not fear, you are not the only Nicolai/Karin supporter out there! Personally, I think they would have made a great couple if he had not been such a dumbass at certain points in the game. (The dream scene was pretty sweet though, don't you think?) I just think that Yuri will never be able to get over Alice enough to love someone else. But that's just my opinion. I would love if you wrote another, more in depth, story like this one, please.
mystical one chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
Karin x Nicolai? Don't really like this pairing. I prefer Karin x Yuri more. Anyway, great fic.
Sakurajust sakura chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
I still think your crazy writting a Karin x nicholai she hates him...HATES him.I still like Karin x Yuri
Leebot chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
Wow, very good job with Nicolai. That really feels like how he would act. I also like how you covered "leaves" and such, translating game mechanics can be particularly tricky. Bravo.
Sakura and Kamui chapter 1 . 11/13/2004
Karin and Nichlai!What's wrong with you! !There is sumthin wrong with there may be sumthin wrong with me since I like Karin and Yuri as a couple.

*I am the box ghost!*~Danny Phantom Kamui-san said that...he's still in trouble.
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