Please continue! This is a great beginning...it made me laugh a lot! Write some more pleaseeee!

I would really love it if you chose to continue this, this fic is awesome and makes me laugh lots. Numair spreading misery and woe... that part just cracked me up.

Great so far! I love worried Numy I can't wait for an update!

PLS KEEP WRITING!

This is awesome, you should definitly continue it. :D

I'm already laughing at the thought if how Kel is going to react with Dom being there. Update soon please!

Aw... poor men. they really can't function properly without us! This was, again, very good. You write dialogue wonderfully, and you keep a steady pace in your stories. You managed to stay in character, too. I loved the whole thing, and can't wait fot the next chapter!

Yus! The fiction starts moving for real! Is this just me reading it oddly, or did you really start this story five years ago? Phew! That's quite a span! Hm, I don't think anyone could pull off a Neal vs. Dom verbal spar, and it would just frustrate readers that nothing actually happened.

For some reason, I loved this bit. I can't even explain why. I read it over and I don't get why I start giggling. Did you mean for that to happen?

“Numair Salmalín – I know you’re in there – now tidy up whatever it is you’re doing and answer the bloody door before I knock it in myself.”

Also-

"Whatever you prefer to call it, something for you to do other than mope around court, spreading your misery and woe to everyone else.”

“I wasn’t aware that I was spreading any misery or woe,” Numair pointed out, gaily.

DUNDUNDUN! VERY much looking forward to all that was foreshadowed here! :) I especially like how the characters are introduced with their teasing and worries. ;)

Anxiously waiting for more.

Oh... this looks interesting! You're a good dialouge writer, and you use the perfedt amount of description. You've got me interested! Keep going and update soon!

Sorry, this is Firevoid again, but I was just looking at the reviews, and there seem to be a few chapters missing! I want to read them, where are they? I glanced at a review and it said chapter 3! Where are chapters 2 and 3? I shall not rest until I have found them!

An interesting plot. I love Numair and Daine's scene,

'he assumed a falsetto which Daine decided was a poor attempt at imitating her voice, “It’s all right, darling, you can sleep in and not go off to teach the pages this morning!”

She snorted. “I’ll miss the way you whine when you can’t find your comb.”

“I do not.”

“Did so this morning.”'

I wondered why Numair's teaching scenes were never shown in the book! So, it's all Daine's fault. Ah. Good start, I'll subscribe so I'll get the happy little email telling me the next chapter's up! I'm already waiting! Gubbai!

Please update soon! This is quite interesting!

m... this is a very strange story...

can i just say without being rude that I thought the first two chapters of Band Camp were excellent but then they went a bit strange. i think there must be a film or something i need to see :S

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anyway... they all seem a bit OOC, but good luck!

NADOLIG LLAWENA BLWYDDYN NEWYDD DDA!

Yay! Im finally finding some good Tortall, Daine Numair, Kel Dom stories! Great Job! Please update, 'k?