A wonderful story that deeply attempts to connect CC to the next series.

The difficulties of breeding tow different species can indeed have unforeseen consequences. but did you have to make all of us readers so sad at this turn of events? sniff good story!

karma

Bit... Awsome

So thats were vega comes from.

This is first time I've nearly cried reading a fanfic in years. now it all makes sense Bit and Vega really are the same characters from New Century, yet all the more sadder because now you know they really don't see Vega and Bit again. T_T

Great Story by the way

Wow! A great story. Sad ending, but a good read nonetheless.

Loved the story, as well as the pairing. You did a great job on Raven and Ryss. They did not stray far from their original attitudes and preferences. I loved shadow and specula. lol.

well i realizedthat vega was sarahs son who was a descendent of raven and reese almost as soon as i had seen them both but theres just one wee problem sarahs older then vega

I really liked this though I don't exactly get all of it well really just the last two chapters I didn't skip anything and yet at the end of 23 they arn't even where vega is yet and in 24 you fastforwarded to the final battle where you really didn't tell where they were and you mentioned a battle raging on outside and I'll go back and look but I don't think you ever said anything about it other than that one sentence and you had vega awake in 24 well thats what i thought and you never really covered the end of bit though you probably didn't need to since if you put vega back to sleep in this one then bit has to be asleep too other than the end it was really good sorry about all the rambling

I loved your ending the way you fused the finish of your story with the new century zoid series Fantastic

Thats a great chapter keep them coming man I really like it

Yeow. . . Awe-shome epilogue. . . I sense a sequel, though. . . Hope to hear more from you. . .

Great job with the whole of Raven's Legacy! More power! XDXDXD

One word to desctibe your story: AMAZING! I never got bored of reading it!

raven sound so funny. i like him. still. anyway i look forward to your new stories. this story gave me nice memories and it was interesting to read. thank you.