Reviews for The Beginning of the End
Guest chapter 12 . 8/13/2018
Me encantó! Saludos desde Colombia.
lilyflower101 chapter 12 . 5/10/2018
I wonder what will happen next.
NoilyPrat chapter 12 . 4/26/2018
Really enjoying all Chris related things in Charmed. Loved the curse ... the poison that Wyatt concocted from his own blood to get Chris to come home to him.
IAmCayj chapter 11 . 5/22/2016
Here they talk about it so easily but in the last chapter Chris didn't even know they knew that he was piper and leo's son
IAmCayj chapter 9 . 5/22/2016
Id have liked to see piper and the others humbled at least once. They were sorry for all they'd done yeah but never truly humbled. even here they didn't do as Chris said and simply tell the fairies the situation, they had the nerve to threaten to fight them for their own water! Id have liked to see someone say no to the charmed ones and keep that no. Chris hasnt because even when he does say no or go against then in this story, they still eventually get what they want. like with the cotton candy thing and leo (like really dude) and with piper babying him even though he claimed his lol was dead. If he was that strongly against letting himself love her again I doubt it'd be washed away do easily. same with Leo, if he tries to say no, the charmed ones get what they want. that was a part of the show I hated. For ex when they went to the tribunal even though they stripped Phoebe's powers that wasn't really a big deal because piper has always been more destructive and impulsive and selfish to be honest yet she got off scot free. even in fanfictions no one seems to want to say no to them and I hate that. Yeah they're witches but they can't always get their way
ShadowWriter33 chapter 12 . 5/15/2016
This is such an amazing story! I love the way you have the family interacting with each other and I love the way Leo is earning Chris' trust back. Nice plot device having Chris poisoned and needing the special antidote. I would love to see the rest of the story of you ever get a chance to finish it.
AJ Granger chapter 12 . 8/6/2015
I like it. Interesting story and I like Evan, and the memories chosen. His happy memories are sort of odd. It's always interesting what makes someone happy, and the connection. I would have liked to see a quiet moment with he and Bianca since there must have been something between the two of them that brought a smile or made him happy, and hopeful for the future. Just a thought.

I hope you work on this again.
brightflare chapter 12 . 5/24/2015
Good story, hope you continue it sometime.
CharlieLittle chapter 12 . 4/7/2015
Luv it! More please ! :)
Barbarablue7241 chapter 12 . 7/11/2014
SO CUTE! I liked this one a lot!
katiek121 chapter 12 . 1/15/2014
Great story! I loved it!
katiek121 chapter 7 . 1/15/2014
I love this story so far! I especially love this chapter! It was sweet of Leo to bring back all those treats for them, he went above and beyond of what Chris requested! Chris will just have to get used to him keeping his promises and then some. When they first mentioned the island I couldn't help but think of "LOST".
Meyli Vaisyl chapter 12 . 6/4/2012
I really, really love this story :) It's awesome.

Meÿli.
Rain in the Dark chapter 12 . 1/17/2012
I loved this story so much, I can't even express it - I've simply read it in one go and I couldn't stop... and then it just got abruptly cut off. I sat staring on the screen while thinking 'Aw, wasn't there supposed to be one more chapter?'

I can't really fault you for leaving the story behind, especially when it comes to the SPN fandom - I remember falling completely in love with the characters when I watched the show. They just seem so real and alive they make you forget about everything else. But I keep hoping that maybe - maybe - one day you will come back to the story and finish it. I'd love to see the conclusion.

Thanks for sharing and take care!
DanceOfTheEntWives chapter 12 . 12/21/2011
awesomeness it's a cool fic! i wish victor would turn up though...
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