I just want to say, I'm enjoying your story. At first, I hated how Vash behaved towards Meryl (but loved how Meryl handled it, love her) and thought "just fucking call it off Vash"! But then, I realized, Vash is just too damn good, he really is. Too damn trusting and beats himself up so much. Jessica, however, can go fuck herself and jump of a cliff, she know what the hell she's doing. Also, the Doc annoys me with this too. Stop treating her like a kid! Anyway, I like the Meryl mutation thing! I want her to live long damnit!

That manipulative COLOSSAL BITCH. Omfggggg.

Bro. This bitch just pissed me off. I knew something was gonna happen. Fuck Jessica.

I finally finished reading this after a while. I thought your story was allright. I love VxM, however, you kept, I don't know, describing them to much. "Handsome blond" this, "buxom temptress", that, and "petite beauty" again. Was kinda distracting to me honestly. Kinda read like a cheap romance novel. Oh well, it was okay at least, better than some of the other Trigun fics. I haven't read your writing recently, but I guess that's the only critique I have.

God...dammit...Nappa...

"I wasn't doing anything, I swear, I was just touching you while you slept! Uuhhh...I mean..."

I want to thank you so much for this story ! For a long time i have search for a great story and your was just what i want !
I wish you could create others beautiful stories on trigun like this (one with wolfood alive if possible ;) )
The oc were very pleasant i like caden ;), the only bad point that i can say is that vash is a little too crybaby.
Thank 3

For some reason the writing style and pacing of this story bother me, but the characters are in-character and as a whole the story comes off as charming, despite the negatives, it's still a good fic.

Aww you cut all the fun stuff out. Please don't tell me you did that with the other chapters...like the one with knives and McKenna. I've read this fic so many times it's not funny, it wasn't like this before.. its not fair. Btw I can't find it on mediaminer either.

Welp. Just managed to finish this chapter today, and I gotta say, I'm impressed.

This is one LOOOOONG story, but it never felt like any chapter was unneeded or any parts dragged on too long, so I gotta give kudos to that.

I also love the way the story changed unexpected directions at times. Did know what was going to happen.

I'd give this 11/10. Would read forever.

Thus, Knives is awesome.

I think him calling her short-girl is too much of a derogatory term.

YES! Now the M rating has finally come into fruition.

Run, Vash, run! (Yaay, I just made a Forrest Gump-reference!)

Vash is gonna spew fire, I just know it!