you misspelled scent a couple of times. Great story though

I am so sorry for your loss. I bet he was a great man and the world just got a little bit worse now that he is not in its presence. He will always be with you watching down on you... your guardian angel. And if he is not there he will also never EVER leave the warmth of your heart. My great grandmother just died so I feel your pain, but I know that she will never actually be gone and that God will treat her good, as he will with your grandpa. I will say a prayer for your grandpa that he will have a good life up in heaven.

update?

I really like his fan fiction!

Hey,

I really love your story but wondered if you sil plan to finis it. I really hope you do.

Xxxxxx Sterre828

It's nice... not good enough though

I absolutely loved this fanfic and can't wait til you get the next chapter up so that I can read and find out what's going to happen next.

Hope Ron doesn't cause to much of a fuss.

love the story its Wonderful ;)

Please continue

OH! Please update

please update it' been about six years!

I'm liking the story so far, but subdominant is a term in music theory for the fourth note of the scale. The word you are looking for there is "submissive".

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Nooooooooooo! This is realy good! Why must the last update be years ago?!