I did notice the ground crack- and I got duly mortified as I screamed, "What is that thing made of?!"

But ah, this is an adorable chapter :)

Shame Kai had to lose but at least he has his Kitty! Lol.

I'm losing interest in Beyblade fics as well, but I'm still gonna finish all the ones I've started, like yours! _

i drew a sheens pic... just couldn't get the head... sad ur leaving the bb fandom but oh well ur still luved lol

ciao

~*~T of TNT

- I have that game! How far are you? I've beaten it, but only once. I'm working on a second time. *snickers* Kitty...Rei's gonna be mad about his nickname. -

update soon! is rei goin to fight tyson?

*sniff* so sad I can't believe it over! and even more sad is your not gonna write anymor bey fics! *continues to cry* I hope you'll get your interest in it again! He he he I've played tales of syphonia too *high five* Your story rocked!

aw it was short but i really liked this chapter! it was really cute!

this was an awesome story and if it plays out like the show then kai will lose and i really don't want him to but if thats what you want then go right ahead i am just giving my opnion. i love your writing you arn't like other writers with tens of thousands of mistakes it actually seems like you check your work before posting it. you also ar great on not going into to much detail but still giving the readers a great picture in there minds. plus you kept my attention the entire time there wasn't one time i got bored. this is a wonderful story and i am glad i read it... hope you continue it and good luck.

Please Update _

This story rocks D

GAH, I love your story. _ o.O

You...Must...Update...or...I...shall...hunt...you...down...and...MAKE...you...update! Mua ha ha ha ha ha...*gag* *coughcough*

Aw...this chapter was so cute! And so sorry for not reviewing the other chapter...-~ But I'm reviewing again now! And I have to say that I liked the title to this chapter-it seems to fit for most life in general. And I *esp* liked all the Bryan/Tala you've got going on in here. It's fun to see how many different people can write out Tala's character-and a lot of people here on seem to all think he's the same way, so it's always a fun read when he's in a fic. Okay...now I'm rambling...-

XD aww! so cute! _ i can't believe they're already together, ne? sorry for not being able to review for the other chapters. they were ALL EQUALLY SATISFYING! O

i really liked how lee managed to accept rei's condition. it's soo sweet how they are soo much like that lil description of the older and younger brother. 3 *cooes*

also, *giggles* the hilarious scenes with tala are just gut-bustingly funny! lmao!

AWESOME KAI AND RAY ARE SO CUTE TOGETHER! MORE SOON PLZ!

Another really kool chapter! Please updatimicate it soon! Oh, and I was able to upload that chapter, but thanks anyway!

Wuv ya!