Reviews for Crimson Tears
sunshineg9 chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
I luaghed at this. I am pretty sure they feel really guilty.
MarzBunni chapter 1 . 1/23/2007
I always have trouble understanding poetry. They always have to have a rhyme or rhythm, it never seems like people truely express themselves because it has to be right. If I could understand poetry and the emotions behind it I'm sure I'd love this. But... I don't. Great Work though.
RioDios chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
Whoa _ . Cool though. Very nice!

I epecially like 'These crimson tears'

Great work, very emotional.
Account-Is-No-Longer-Active chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Wow, that's dark, I like it. Good job!
The Mad shoe chapter 1 . 2/9/2005
Dark, angsty and good.
skywalking chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
Sad, depressing, great, I like this poem it shows how someone feels when they are lied to again and again
ravenxbb4eba chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
o mi gosh...so sad! me cry! ..O.o.. pleze continue n make raven guilty n depressed or sumthin! pleeze!
WaterAdept0514 chapter 1 . 10/14/2004
Once again, amazing! I love the way it's written as well as the words! Keep up the great work!

P.S. I'll make sure to read your Code Lyoko story soon!
fiddler jones chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
last part is very well written...
Snipergrrl chapter 1 . 10/11/2004
that was the best poem i've read in along time, but it could be better
Change-Of-Heart2 chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
Very sad and angsty and depressing. Nice work (even if it is due to the suicide of one of my fav characters due to my fav character). _
keystone chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
Well, I am not a fan of the suicide or angst genre, but I do recognize its prevalence in modern teens. This particular poem is rather normal, but it certainly is not bad. I think you should have gone into the backstory a little bit more, and maybe even extended it a little bit. But otherwise, I did enjoy it, and wanted to tell you that I did.
Amber Skye chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
Oh...wonderfully morbid. The rhyme scheme was unique, and effective. I like that one line, "I've cut too deep", it almost sounded like he didn't mean to...

Fantastic. Reading poems about death and pain and blood and angst makes me so happy... _

-Amber
BlackShield chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
Woah... another awesome poem... Though it is BB/R, it's just a poem, so I decided to read it anyway. Missin' your emails,

BlackShield-
Raventhedarkgoddess chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
Yay, another of your dark poems. *cheers* Anyway, I love it, the rhyme is good. (I can't spell, could you tell?) Anyway, it's great. I'm babbling, so I'll shut up now.

~Raventhdarkgoddess
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