I really like the imagery here; excellent work.

Yet another priceless fic from Colonel Kay. And this only got three reviews?

Keep writing.

I like this view on Roy during the war. The last line especially sticks with me, and I think I'm probably going to remember the whole fic just from that.

"What he really wants, Roy thinks, is to drown himself."

This is a very interesting story that gives some wonderful insight into Roy during the Ishbal War. It's great!

I found this line rather poetic: "But he keeps on snapping. Until he snaps." That was a creative way to express that thought.

~Cybra

*on a review spree*

This has to be my favorite take on Roy to date. The path his thoughts take, and their ultimate conclusion, is really amazing and quite chilling. Your writing is really remarkable.