I've followed this story since it's birth and loved every bit of it. Your style of prose is amazing and makes me believe this is what Koyasu would have planned if he ever focused more on Schwarz. A bit saddened and disappointed it's not complete but I still have hope for a finale. Thanks for writing it.

Hey, I am a recent fan, silent but avid reader of this story and please, you need to include your live journal addy when you post notices that stories are being removed from FFN and move to your Livejournal acct. Wouldn't want to lose this story or any of your Weiss stuff. It is addictive. Very well written, and so full of Weiss/Scwartz goodness or rather very delicious badness. Keep up the excellent work. Please send email response of your Livejorunal address to Thanks

Hi there !

I just wanted to post a little something. It's been ages since I didn't read any fanfictions, and this one caught my attention just when I decided to change my mind and go back to reading some.

It's just awsome. I can't tell very well what I'm feeling but seriously, this is just BRILLIANT. You have a real talent for suspens ! I really liked the idea of filling the two years or something gap between WK and Gluhen. Plus I think that you have a good hold on every character's personnaility. I really love it ! Sometimes, there's some lenghts or some little things I disagree with but it's details !

I don't know if you're still writting this; if not I hope this little comment will give you the strengh to keep it up !

I'm gonna check your other WK stories and your sites to see what other wonders you have in stock.

Just thank you for this ! It was the best thing I could find for my return on this fiction site. And because of you I found some interesting things, like movies and music. I'm totally hooked up on Concrete Blonde :D

And, as a side-note, I used to not like YxS but the way it came was so smooth and natural, I almost cried ;; I really wonder if Brad will definitively let go or not... (or, as a matter of fact, if Schuldig will let go off Brad.. ;;)

Anyway. Enough said !

Shu

Is this the last chapter? Please don't let it be *puppy eyes*

I actually read this entire story off of your insanejournal, and wasn't able to review it since I don't actually have an account. And then of course, I found the story all on AFTER reading everything. So here's an EXTREMELY condensed review overall, not really worthy of this amazing work, but I'll do my best. 3

First off, this was one of THE most amazing pieces of fanfiction I've ever read. Your method of storytelling is wonderful, you always keep me guessing, and it's very hard to pull myself away from the computer while I'm in the middle of reading.

I love that you have the story from Schuldig's perspective, I think it's the best way that this could have been written, because it lets the reader see all his flaws and strengths, and doesn't give in too much of what's going on, since he's only able to observe and make his own guesses, leaving the reader to do the same.

Your characterizations of all the members of Schwarz are amazing. They all have a very real feel to them, with very human characteristics and endearing connections to each other (Schuldig and Farfarello are especially captivating in their friendship- one of my alltime favorite moment in the entire story is when they give each other a candybar toast and quote Bill and Ted's). The one sided Farfarello/Nagi stuff is slowly breaking my heart, I have no idea what to expect from the two of them, but I hope it'll work itself out in the end.

I love how much thought and care you put into your writing. The song/lyric/quote notes with every chapter really demonstrate this, and really shows how much you put into the story. I'd also like to thank you for some rather excellent artist recommendations, The Cruxshadows are currently my favorite thing to listen to on my iTunes.

Alright, enough of my rambling. I hope that you'll get the urge to update soon, especially now with the newest turn the chapters have taken. I look forward to seeing more from you~

it's funny. i found this story on another site a long time ago, then i lost it, and now i've found it here. yay! i really want to see how this is going to pan out, so keep up the good work! i can't wait for more!

ASOTA

I've been following this story since the very beginning (years ago now!) and I must say the suspense is killing me! I don't suppose another chapter is in the works, is it?

my goodness a cliff-hanger! but ... but ... what happens? update more soon!

*sniffles*

you'd better update soon! :(

the end of this chapter was stunning. liked the last line a lot. poor schu, and brad sucks at talking to him this time. didn't anyone ever teach him how to lie?

you write first person illness so well! loved schuldig blanking in and out there. :)

lesigh...it seems to me like your characterization of yohji would have wanted to follow schuldig. he's not in kritiker, he doesn't seem to have anything to ground him to japan and he's not aware of crawford's position for him as liason to kritiker, that's all bastard-manipulation stuffs. hmph. i wish the weiss version went this far along so i could get into his head.

i'd missed farf. i'm glad he's back and i think it's sweet he did lookout for them. :)

:'(

this chappie's making me think of the end of gluhen and that's giving me a big 'oh noes!' sensation. i might have to write fan fiction for your fan fiction (not that i'd post it or anything) just to put in a little more of the type of happy i'd want to see. but i'm addicted, as you've noticed, and am mostly sad that i can't read any more right now. see you soon...?

well, tempted as i am to do a little happy dance for schu-schu hooking up with the bishi of my choice, methinks this be a temporary tease for the people in the yotan camp. the crawfoo camp has received a lot more attention throughout this fic and you're being terribly devious and mean.

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unless you're not.

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in which case thank you.

yay! you're back, yayness! and i was just thinking about this fic the other night too. i suppose this is my karmic cookie for making it through the busy season without freaking out at any tourists. XD

as for this particular chapter, i continue to love when yohji and schu get all cuddly. can't believe it though, i'm actually kinda missing crawford. can't wait for some more plot to pick up! :)