So much fluff,I loved reading this story.

Goddammit, Seto!

You're one of the luckiest person ever!

You got all Jounouchi Katsuya's first! First kiss, First love, and the next soon would be his 'First time'!

Goddammit lucky!

Oh well... Katsuya is lucky too to have Seto as his first and would be only Lover! Seto is cool, handsome, attractive, rich, etc!

Both are the luckiest couple ever!

I LOVED IT! I'm not to good with the grammar thing either but I thought it was great if my opinion means anything.

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Love it! Espesially the little talk jou had with yami. :3 great work!

GOD DAMMIT YOU TALK WAY TOO FREAKING MUCH! Not that there's anything wrong with pouring out your words to people who actually care to read (not me) but STILL! It's like your writing your whole life story! Calm yourself! Holy macaroni and cheese!

Anyways! Nice story, it ended nicely and it was cute too. I see you fixed your *ahem* "flaw" with the little descriptive beginnings for your chapters. I would've pointed it out earlier because I'm a prick like that but I forgot. So I'm going to "mention" it now but you and I know I made it pret-ty obvious as to what I'm talking about. *snickers* I would call you an idiot but I'm not THAT mean, plus I don't even know you so I'll spare the time and enegry.

100th REVIEWER BABY! XD I AM SO AWESOME! I just gave you the gift of something great. I should rewarded for my generosity and grace. *smiles*

Ciao ciao bonita!

*reads and chapter and shakes head* Aye, you didn't get it. In fact, you didn't get it at all. It's "breath" lassy, not "breathe".

I'm still a virgin and still sexy as hell! Believe it! *gets shot*

cute :)

My god, this is sooo cute~!

I'm so glad this was recommended to me! :D

interesting

I like it!

Okay, this is a great story, although I'm a couple years late in saying so.

But I did notice a couple of grammarical mistakes, such as in the beginning: "because he wasn't even aloud to have an after school job" aloud should be allowed.

Additionally, when you have dialogue, the action word shouldn't be captialized - "Hello puppy." Droned Seto...eye. -

"Hello, puppy," droned Seto...eye. You did this with all your dialogue.

"he seemed unaffected by the others queer smirk" - others should have an appostrophe (') before the (s) since it is possessive, and 'Ass' should be lower-cased as well as putting in a couple of commas with 'however'.

Other then that, I think this story is really great. Seto and Jou are both very IC, and I'm a sucker for humour with my romance.

Damn you I wanted more!

Amazing story, everyone was sooooo IC, well Yami was a little OC but he wasn't important in this fic lol (not saying in general, just as a minor character in this story, I love Yami ).

Very cute, but I think the rating should be a T since there wasn't anything other than kissing and a few suggestions in this little ficlet. I'm a big fan of M rated lemmony stories (with a plot and IC'ness of course), so when I see a 15 thousand long story with the rating M.. yeah i'm looking for a lemon or some form of lime even at some point haha!

Well anyway that still doesn't take away the cuteness of this story :D

I really liked this! And I definitely loved the fact you didn't have Seto call him 'Puppy' and 'Mutt' everytime he addressed Jou. I know it's what he does but so many authors say it TOO much! *sigh* I really like the whole sentimental about his first kiss thing in Jou. I can see Shizuka getting him to care about that... So sweet! I loved the poem too. Very nice! Is it yours?

~Duchess