I had really been enjoying this... But why would Tsunade kill her own men? And why would ANBU enjoy killing an ally?

I LOVE YOU NARUTO! I can't even

He was like tell her I'm not coming or heh you won't be! XD

Slutura does not deserve anything good especially chuunin vest as she's just a manipulative little cunt and totally evil. Naruto should've got it you stupid moron! Slutura is NOT strong. You're just a deluded sakutard!

Very nice story! But the frequent throw ins of Japanese words and phrases isn't really my thing. I got tired of trying to translate to see what they mean so I just glaze over them and hope I guess the right meaning. XD But i am really liking it so far!

This was omg..UNBELIEVABLE

Hahaha cute! XD

'Proud' so u shud be i really enjoyed dat fic (i dont usually review cos im too lazy) but iot kept me on toes and i liked how there was loads of diiferent storylines and then they concluded all the things i was confused about i now realise anyway i waffling (english word dunno if u o it) but yeah dat was GR8!

wait, they just forgave sakura? just like that? she gets off scott-free? geez, even sasuke had a true reason when he went missing-nin! ~sighs~ at least you did kakashi and iruka well.

naruto cheated on sasuke TWICE and they're both just okay with it? sorry, but that's total OOC, not to mention just unrealistic.

why is everyone so weak? they all keep getting knocked out of faint due to stress. seems kinda ooc. and i'm very curious as to what's wrong with iruka.

i really don't get this thing with sakura, especially why the boys want her or what she did to earn such affection or importance from anybody, but i'll try to read your story besides that. the summary seems to imply that it focuses on kakairu and naruto and sasuke, so it's kinda odd.

SAKURA'S been through so much? what? u kidding me? fool exhausted herself and everyone acts like she's dying. she does no work, has a good family life, and people pity her? geez. i hope you don't make her the focus of the story. despite my personal dislike, your other characters are far more interesting.

was there a point to this chapter? sakura is quite useless, dear, barely any better in shippuden, but before then she really outta be pushed off a cliff. the story before that was fine though.

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I seriously have a 'thing' for this fic. Not sure if the 'thing' is a good one or not.

I hate parts, but loves some. Frustrated by many and awe by most. Enrage rarely by it, but content for most parts. There are good points and bad points and I don't know which one have more leverage.

Great story, though a little confusing. (Also I think that you may have underestimated the Sharingan's power and Kakashi's skills just a little.)

Thank you for writing this story.

Good Night