wow i really enjoyed that story

Good story, well written, only thing for me to suggest is that, somehow, Tokimi survives for later fights, and that the relationship between the three goddesses is revealed to Tenchi and the gang... Oh one more thing I definitly vote "yes" on an epologue.

Hmm, not bad. The characterizations were, in my opinion, pretty good except for Asuza's, Kagato's, and Tokimi's. The former seemed a little bit over the top. Kagato was lacking some of the depth and coldness he possessed and came across as a run-of-the-mill I'm going to kill you all and gain ultimate power villain. Not necessarily a bad approach, mind you, just somewhat simplistic. Tokimi, well, you might've wanted to reveal her motive. She's fine in the fist half, but in the end where you have her alternate between restoring Washu's memories and trying to eliminate everyone I was more confused than anything else by her. Still, with those exceptions, the characters felt like themselves. The plot was pleasant, and the fight scenes were good. All in all, not a bad story. It will keep you reading and waiting for more.

This story was awesome! Please write that epilogue I want to read more. I especially liked this story because Ryoko had different powers and stuff. She's my favorite so I like stories that give her power-ups and the center of the story and stuff. I hope you write a sequel to this like having everyone trying to master their powers and like Tokimi's kid or something go after everyone. I think that'd be cool. Anyway if you want some help if you deside to do it e-mail me, , well bye! _

i thought tsunami was the most powerful being in the universe and created the most light hawk wings in the universe (10)! anyway i like the story and that sasami gets some attention.

what happens next? write more!

Great story but Tenchi's the man. He should have kicked more ass. What I noticed from watching all three series is that no matter the odds of the situation Tenchi over came them. I personaly think it should have been him to save the day but hey this is your story not mine. Any way great story.

Hey, I'm new here at the Tenchi fanfics and this story is my first and it's good (I'm glad because I really hate stupid romance stories...) anways, keep up hte good work!

Yuuki

Quality! It was a good fight!

What? Who? Where? An explanation, please! Luved the story!

PLEASE CONTINUE OH YA MAKE RYOKO GET THEE WINGS AGAIN AND SAVE THE DAY!

Write an epilogue and expain but make Yosho the new Emperor but without chosing a wife. This way Ayeka can't get her hands on Tenchi and Yosho can still remain on earth as the remaining Jurians live on earth from now on. But he and Tenchi [grandson] won't allow them to impose their rules on the planet, they just live among the humans and thats' all. But if not, great story, keep up the good work.

kick ass

great chpaer ..nice ending but an epilogueis definitely needed

This...is...so...damn...SWEET!

brill