I spit out my soda when I read the part about cell kissing pan, and then again when Goku said height didn't have anything to do with 'it', keep it up my friend and you have a greatly funny story

I enjoy this "fanfic" very much to true it really is enjoyable it has made me laugh and I haven't laughed since I was a child watching Dragonball my own wife doesn't make me laugh I came home and felt nostalgic after remembering my younger years and decided to see how people made stories from my childhood show and well I simply love your story it is truly entertaining now I'm no big shot like my brother and I probly couldn't convince him but you should try to make a TV show you have a good imagination and many people these days don't but what I'm also saying is you are doing a great job keep it up

I'm normally not into this kinda fanfic but the right his is hilarious and interesting, don't give that up. Oh and I love how even Though buu is your fav you still right the others very well :P

im liking it so far i was wondering if you could make more.
trunks and an OC story.

Awesome story

A tad but of a unfoutante ending but hey I respect your reasons and if I read correctly it's not the end. Keep up the good work and in sure your art work is fine. By the way damn you are/were 13! I'm 13 and I like to think i can write fairly well but you are amazing... Next thing I'll learn your The guy who writes prequel or something. Read 2011/03/prequel-begin/ it seems right up your alley. If you do check it out enjoy.

nine years later... great story though.

So far, it's funny and cute. But a question comes to me, why even have the yellow button? What if they accidently hit it? If the yellow button was under the family's control or even Yama's it make a bit more sense. Sorry if this was a bit nit-picky.

I may be bisexual and I love a gay joke as much as the next person, but GOD was that stiff.

Ya see what I did there?

I love how the story is coming up! I can't wait to see what happens! Update when you can I will be waiting! :)

I LOVE this story. I really hope you reconcile writhing it. I also love your drawings they actually made my think that bastad frieza was hot and has a peaks of a heart.

Wait...
A...
Minute...
BUU COOKS?!
...he should teach me!

O_O
What.
The.
HFIL
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I didn't think this was a CellxPan!
O_O I want to read this EVEN F****N MORE!

Wow, your thirteen? I can't believe that. Such amazing creativity

Yo, I love this bro