Reviews for WhAt'S GoOd FoR Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good good. Update soon. ~ Oasis |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alex, you lower-than-dirt creep. . . . No guy has a right to do that to a girl. NOT ONE FLIPPING GUY! Good story. I'll read on. ~ Oasis |
![]() ![]() ![]() Er . . . who is Mr. Muffles? Anyway, good beginning to a story. I shall read on. ~ Oasis |
![]() ![]() ![]() To be completely honest with you, this is a condensed version of my review. If you want to see the whole thing, feel free to contact me. Still some OOC to work with, I know she changed but it seems she changed to much, and Draco, well, it’s a cannon thing if you know what I mean. I’m not really a fan of ! characters. Don’t worry, if I don’t like something completely I stop reviewing, so my reviews should inspire confidence in you. As I said I had a very long review including the answer to your note, this is the short version. Keep it up, who knows if this surprises us in the end. By the way, I got the cannon thumping purist from the expression bible thumping purist (no offence to anyone who might fall under this description). If you know what the last one is you know what the first one is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is great! keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it! |
![]() ![]() It's really good, but it's going way too fast. I think that she should have been with Alex a little longer, and in the first day he cheats on her? I don't know, but otherwise very well done, I'm not trying to flame or be mean, I really like the story and how it's going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() First thing, this is not a flame. Just a bit of constructive criticism. The story still has the potential I mentioned but it needs a little something. Ginny sounds a bit OOC, but that's just me. I consider it was a bit rushed, he just asked her to be his girlfriend after all and not even a day has passed. Again, try not to fall in the "Merlin!" cliché to much. And next tie, try a bit more interaction with Draco since this is after all a Fire and Ice fic. But I still maintain this story has a good potential and that I am sure that latter on it will get better, this is after all just the second chapter. Guess I’m to much of a cannon thumping purist for some things. Keep working on it, good luck. |
![]() ![]() SWEET! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok i pressed the pretty purple button now what? OH YEAH! Love the story it has a great more plz! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it had the potential to be good but you rushed things. she randomly started dating a kid, never hung out with him once and is not upset. come on, why would u go to the trouble of asking her out and then snogging a stupid slytherin slut the same day? |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes, I know I should finish reading the other one, but i got distracted by this one. I'ts a good job, didn't know that Ginny had it in her. As for it being a Ginny/Draco fic, I'm ok with it as long as it's a good read, wich this one has potential to be. Good luck and carry on. |
![]() ![]() this is good plez post more soon :) |
![]() ![]() so far so good keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it Ginny is a potty mouth! Draco and Ginny?... I like it. |