Hmm... I like it! Even though there's not really any Barac/Ruti stuff going on, he just amuses me :D Nice job

Yay! There's another fic on Julie's books! Now that that's done, I'm sorry I didn't review earlier. I could have sworn I put you on my Author Alert list...ah, well, I found it finally!

This confused me a little until I realized you were writing from Barac's first person POV. You also had a few problems with changing tense from past to present and back again. And yes, it is horrifically short, but Happy Birthday anyway!

~Red