Beautiful. Simply Beautiful.

nice! You're a good writer!

You know, despite the fact I'm not a R/S fan or anything, that was absolutely beautiful.

. ! You truly are a talented writer!. Great job!, if you have any more stories like these, i'm going to go check.

I could've done without her moments with Remus and Sirius. Personally it makes no sense. More fannon than cannon if anything, not that anything has been confirmed as of yet. Put her with some random person like Jack or Simon. I just find it highly improbable James's friends–both–would touch her behind his back. Other than that it was fine, nothing great but nothing horrible either.

wow, that was really good. I dont usually read the one shots or the ones with no summery, but im glad i did read this one. Your a really good writer. please write another one, or read on of mine.

Beautiful imagery. I can't even think of something else to say to that except beautiful.

Scratch that, I've got a second wind. It was so cool how this was written in the present tense, yet still technically it was mostly all memories of the past, told like they were on a fast forward viewing. And if the whole thing wasn't interesting enough, that ending. It was... just beautiful. It makes me feel happy and hopeful and warm all at once.

Nicely done. I hope you continue writting like this.