Nicely done.

Spelling. Grammar, you need a beta. Some of these sentences make no sense whatsoever. I didn't get past the first half-dozen paragraphs before giving up.

nice

The story is coming along pretty well. I recognized the photographer: PETER PARKER strikes again! And I was happy to see some references to the very ORIGINAL Uncanny X-Men stories as well.

But, in all seriousness though, PLEASE, get yourself a beta reader and run this through a spell checker! It would help out a GREAT DEAL in seeing your thoughts on this story.

your idea is a intresting one and is much better then the constant ROMY that seems to have littered recently, but you seriously are in dire need of some basic grammer, your story is almost painful to read stringing a sentance together seems difficult enough and the speeling is awful, i recommend you proof read in fact i recommend you actually read your own fic.

The reference to New Mutants was a reference to Legion, when he first joined up with them and it was revealed that he was Xavier's son. And I like the way that you have shown why Eric and Charles are working together. After seeing and hearing what Apocolypse wants to do, I'm not surprised to see them working together.

Well, it seems that the teams worked out well. But Israel means material from VERY OLD Uncanny X-Men material, as well as New Mutant material. I look forward to seeing how well you work that into your storyline.

I admit, I have my missgivings about using a mixture of X-Men Evoloution in this story, but it seems to be working well. Let see what you have planned next.

This was nice, I can't wait to see what the danger is (although I have a pretty good guess at who it is)...

If EVER there was a threat that would bring Eric and Charles together, it would be only one thing: APOCOLYPSE! I like the story, just not sure about using a movie version of the X-men crossed over with X-Men Eveloution for this tale.