Its really sweet!

aww,that was cute

wow this was GREAT! into my favs it goes

ps. i would want to be in slytherin cuz I have a slytherinish personality and i am sly in my approach to get whatever i want

hey - cute story!

That was pretty okay. I felt bad for Malfoy when Hermione screamed at him, flat outright! I mean... okay whatever. Otherwise it was good. Sweet Sixteen that's right. And for one, I don't think anyone would scream at a someone who did so much for them! keep writing and don't get discouraged!

what was that? u have to explain why draco was being nice, and why would everybody in the great hall wear muggle clothes just 4 her. and u ewent 2 fast. very unimpressed. VERY. and u fflamed my story? n/e way, it would also help if u put it in 3rd person. u use discriptive language but in the wrong place. use discription where it is needed

Um...I like the idea..its very cute,but...uh...sweetie..i..uh...hate to break it to ya, but...um...DRACO HATES HERMIONE!

What was that?

What-I mean it seriously-was that?

It's too sudden, too unlikely to be so quick, and too out of character. You demolished the Draco Malfoy of J.K's work. You could have been more descriptive, too. The writing was only okay. The plot, though, was terrible. Poorly planned and poorly executed. I'm unimpressed.

I really like this story. I thought it was really cute. I wish it wasnt a one-shot though. It would've been a good story if it was longer. But, alas, I am not the author, you are, and it is your choice to do as you wish.

-An adoring fan.

Great, that was awesome!