I know the decryption just by reading Felix's reaction! every fifth word! something about hama abusing him! woots!

NO! DON'T LET THE BIG BROTHER WIN! Hehe! Sorry! That just reminded me so much of me and my big brother! /

But it was funny! XD

Ahh! That was sop random like me *sits on your head while eating a chocolate pencil and says random questions* Um.. don't answer that. This was awsome I like the whats a dishwasher? part.

Mahaha! that was so funny! Just as it always is! I like the way you portrayed the psyciatrist!

Was that Link who made a cameo? If it is, it's SO funny! I'm not sure how SpasticDjinn's gonna do when he finds you in his closet, but please try not to kill him. I'm still eagerly awaiting the latest chappie of his fic, "Golden Boys"!

Hee! This is very funny! I've been following it from day one shame I've never reviewed... But yeah I'll be waiting in anticipation for the next chapter!

Ah, much improved.

Still a few issues however... I shall address the first with a simple quote...

"The more water you draw from the well of randomness, the more likely you are to be killed in combat by a rubber duck."

Which means absolutely nothing. But i shall pretend it is construcive crit, so you have a 'special' talk with me in the next chapter.

And, yes, the story has improved. I shall give it a score that, as you shall notice, is marginally higher than the last.

Total Score: 8.5/10

SpasticDjinn

The Djinni of Djinn

Feels better about his flame, and is nearly convinced TBRE is not hiding behind his bedroom door with a butcher's knife.

I have been following this fic for awhile and haven't bothered to review. 'Til now, that is. This was great! Reminds me of having to deal with my two older brothers a little bit. Keep up the good work! Oh, and have Ivan get his revenge on Hama, please?

Right... This started out as a simple spoof of family life, and now it's exploded into a full-scale story. I don't really like whats going on here, it seems too rushed and unplanned. Come on, that's not like you, TBRE! Whats going on?

Pros: Umm... Well written, lots of gramatical jargon

Cons: Rushed, weird, silly, basically no plot, YOU ARE HURTING IVAN!

Total score: 7/10

Please dont kill me for giving you such a low score. I just think you need some incentive to clean up this story.

SpasticDjinn

the Djinni of Djinn

*cowers behind a tree and awaits TBRE's response in the next chapter*

o_o Wow. I like Felix, but this makes him seem so...cowardly that it's...AMUSING. xD Good job with it! 24 padlocks? My God, mine is inside a binder. o_o

jajajaja, they were SO slow getting the hang of it! It was so easy to see! jajajajaja, it was fun update soon!

Heh-heh, funny. The 3nd and 3rd chapters are equally hilarious! When will the next update be?

LMAO HAHAHAA great story update soon

Felix is NOT a crybaby! He's hot! *cries* And way more powerful than Jenna!

But yeah, I loved this - hilarious.

That moral doesn't work for me, cos my younger brothers only four... If my parents came home to find me sobbing at the bottom of the staircase, they'd ask if I had any confessions. Whatever. Great story, if you don't continue it, i'll get Ivan onto you.

Ivan: I AM NOT SMALL, GODAMNIT!

The Djinn of Djinni, SpasticDjinn