Oh noes, a party is going to be disasterous...i cant wait. It should be like a pool party. And dont feel bad about your spelling or grammer, because its way better than most of the kids in my honours english class (serioursly you should feel proud that you know two languages, unlike me)

This is really, good, and realy funny. I love it. I'm not picking on your spelling, but would it help if I Beta'd it for you (Beta-ing is like editing, getting all the spelling and grammar for you, so you don't have to worry about it) If you'd like me to then just email me, and I'll get started ok?

This is a very interesting fanfic. h, I KNOW Zira would get in trouble if he invited the demons of hell. Um, Adam Young?

I like this fanfic already. Uh, what blue pillar of light? I'm not Christian; is it some sort of religious thing?

Or perhaps you invented it; cheers for you if that's the case. :D

I think the story's good, and why are you complining about your english? It's good I tell you, good!

The story wasen't hillarius in a lol way, BUT it made me smile alot... A bit above avirige (? am I making any sens here?) on the ff-net.

Please uppdate!

Jippie, new chapter! Wow, you are VERY fast! I wish I were that fast...

This chapter wasnt bad at all, not as good as the others, but certainly worth reading it!

I look forward the party..XD

So you better go on!

Despite minor grammatical and spelling mistakes, this is very entertaining. Please keep working on it.

Yeah, its going on!*grins*

Your idea was much better than mine!

Of course I dont mind youre rushing the sins, i also wait for...something. _

Now, hurry, hurry, hurry, I am very impatient!

Dorilys

*adds story to her favorite-list*

Hallo! Wow, youre fast! *happy*

And it IS funny.

Sloth? Er...I dont know what this is..its "Faulheit" in german, isnt it? Well, I dont know either what to do...let me think...they could leave the house and make a run, or something and Azi doesnt want to go on, after a while and just halfsleeps where he is...in Crowleys lap...XDD

Hurry, I want to read the next chapter!

Oho, this gonna be fun! *big smile*

They will do all the sins, won't they? I hope so...(ignore my last sentence, I just havent read a C/A- FanFic since...last year, it seems. T_T

This IS a C/A, isnt it? Even if its not, I like it. Just Azi and Crowley together. Theyre so cute...*stupid fangirl behaviour*

Go on!

Dorilys

This sounds very interesting so you better continue this please.