| Reviews for Tangle |
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  Donni chapter 1 . 11/12/2015 Very lovely |
 fiesa chapter 1 . 5/6/2012 I read ten brilliant one shots this week, and this one was one of them! It took me a while to review, though. Sorry. I really, really liked this story. Not only because it is a one shot or because it is Naruto but because it is a team seven threesome, and I love them a lot because I can never decide who of the three should be with whom. Couple two and one of them will be the odd one out... But not here! The way you describe how they grow together - bleed into each other until noone knows where one begins and the other ends - was beautiful and perfect, because it was imperfect in itself. Kakashi's role should be honored, if he managed to give them hints on how it might work out better, and their way of thanking him was exactly what one would think the characters would do. I loved the way you described them, too, Sasuke having become a little bit softer and Naruto a little bit respectable and Sakura a little bit wiser, and yet all of them are young and inexperienced and afraid. But they blend together, get used to it, fit into each other more perfectly every day until they don't even notice how used they have gotten to each other. The imaginery is beautiful, as are the scenes you described, and the read was wonderful. Writing from Sakura's point of view, too, was perfect. As was the ending. I enjoyed reading a lot - thank you for sharing this! |
| Babybuu23 chapter 1 . 12/11/2011 OMG! i loved it sooooo much! ur writing is soooo good! thx soo much 4 writing/posting this 4 us 2 read! |
| Shinoburedo chapter 1 . 6/25/2011 Great, great work here. Slightly manipulative Sakura, but I like it. |
| Abryl chapter 1 . 3/4/2010 This was a cute little but at the same time complex story. I really enjoyed reading this, you did an awesome job! |
| Whats Mine Is Yours chapter 1 . 11/28/2009 wow intimate ...and hot. |
| tcl7189 chapter 1 . 6/4/2009 nice... |
| Tarou chapter 1 . 5/3/2009 Ah, there aren't enough sakusasunaru stories in this world. Very nice. Stylish. Sensual. Thank you. |
| Sakuraangel1327 chapter 1 . 4/12/2009 haha, nice one. I write a lot of SasuSakuNaru as well. but mostly theres only two pairings. SakuNaru and SasuSaku. XD |
| Proof of Nothing chapter 1 . 3/5/2009 Awesome! , |
| Melitza chapter 1 . 11/16/2008 Team 7 OT3 FTW :D |
| bobalinabokonon chapter 1 . 7/23/2008 But what does Inner Sakura have to say about all this? |
| Valentine Satiguss chapter 1 . 7/12/2008 That was freaking awesome. _ Lucky Sakura. Ha ha ha. |
| Tricia1224 chapter 1 . 4/17/2007 This is really sweet. In a way it fits too. |
| Penguin Steps chapter 1 . 3/11/2007 Holy whow... that was... very smexy. Great narrative. |
