It so sad how Egwene is passed around like that. Although it's practically funny, it is very sad.

:0 :( :) :

I would like to see you add to this. I think its a good story, and the pairing is interesting. Good description. I hope you'll update soon.

~BWHH

Quite a dilemma you've created for Egwene and Moiraine. I must say that I'm enjoying it thus far, but to end it there would be diastrous. I believe that I might just become ultimately obsessive if you don't continue it. This story has great potential, especially for plot development, if only you would continue it.

I haven't much to criticise, though I will remind you be true to the characters personalities and mannerisms. Take time to develop the story and watch for simple things like grammer.

Well done, I look forward to another chapter.

Very enjoyable story keep up the good work.

*wink*

Egwene and...Moiraine...? Ugh, ugh, ugh, ugh, and ew

Omg this was great! My only real complain was that I wish this would've been longer! This was great! Keep writing!

Banshee Queen.

P.S A cheeky Moiraine eh? Gotta' love that Aes Sedai. :D

I liked the second chapter much better than the first...

...but you already know that!

42! 42!

But yeah, other than that it was good.

Dude that was good. I'm les my self and i have to say that you did very well. Please write more.

woho! WOW! my god that was god!

lol...wow...that's sort of funny. And I kind of feel sorry for Egwene..she really had no say; just being passed on from one to the other...but she didn't seem to mind...lol. Ended a bit suddenly, but it was good.

Oh, love it. _ Job well done, I liked it quite well. I always thought that a Nynaeve/Egwene pairing would be interesting, though throwing Egwene in with Moiraine was just as much so. Well done indeed, not bad for your first third-person.

~Jer