Tonks is too stupid to live. Let her die so Harry can find someone who isn’t a fucking moron.

Thank you so much for sharing your Wonderful story. I have truly enjoyed reading it.

Damn, for a first try at writing something in another language that was pretty good. Not as clean as The Dark Witch and the Necromancer, but a pleasant read nonetheless. I greatly wish that I could read German, as more than half of your stories are written in the language. Google translate through chrome makes for some funny word choice, like 'director' instead of 'headmaster' for Professor Dumbledore for example.

Unspeakables were a research division. They catalogued and studied prophecy’s along with studying artifacts and cursed objects. The most dangerous aspect of the job was researching magic trying to rediscover what has been lost and create new spells and magical branch’s. They were far from specialists and it’s actually annoying how you are making them completely different from what they were.

Wait why are snape and kreacher guilty?

I feel like harry was a little too easy on tonks about certain aspects of her lecture to him

Ew that was sorta cringy to read lol.

Please write a sequel already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

well done good story. I have tried your German story's translated on here but thay done sound right as it is a shame as liked the two English story's so far

You need to focus more on making the sentences understandable and legible, while also putting quotations in the right places. Other than that I'd say some stuff is just too short, little to no detail at all.

You made a small error here where you referred to Rick but called him Will out side of the pub.

good story

This was such an amazing story! I loved it!

the relationship is too fast

Good

and why not simply escape using the shadow apparation. nooo we will train 3 years then play bodyguard instead of fighting the war, and ofc endangering whole of hogwarts then get captured and fight on their terms. come on its like an contest to make each line more stupid then the last