Cool story- great word choices, really sets the mood. Very Nny-like contemplation in its broken narrative.

Stop saying your stuff is bad. It makes people doubt you really want reviews that say something other than "this is good."

Twas fairly good. Great descriptions. .

To person down there: This is not Kyou-obsessed Kiki. I know this, because this person has a differant livejournal from Kyou-obsessed Kiki. Kyou-obsessed Kiki is on my friend's list on livejournal.

ANYWAY... yeah.

greetings!

I have the idea that you may be the one great Kyou Sohma artista off of Fanart Central...?

The name Kiki (Kyou Obcessed Kiki?) sounded really familiar...

Anyways, that was great. It made about as much sense as Neon Genesis Evangelion ever did, but that was friggin' awesome!

anyways, feel free to email.

ja ne!

itsu mo,

-tasuki saotome

What the hell is this speak of taking this story down? Are you insane? That was really good... or at least I thought so... I mean, come on... that was very well written. And it did make sense, if you thought about it. Keep it up, man. It's too good to take down...

It is NOT bad, you crapbaby, it's wonderfully written.

Trust me, I've read worse.