| Reviews for Fantasy Dreams |
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   LindyWatson chapter 12 . 10/8/2017 The ENDING SUCKS. The fact that a narration ending is the most boring ending. And plus how you made Meilin an extremely annoying bitch here! And you just let her get away like that is so damn annoying! Syaoran is another idiot here. What more is there to expect? Most of your stories, you made all the Syaoran a stupid, coward idiotic man. If he wants to end his engagement to Meilin why can't he treat her bad even in the end, even Sakura's not there anymore, he's still soooo damn nice to Meilin! HOW GREAT! That's why she's always clinging onto him because he's treating her nicely. God, he can't even glare at her! He can shout, yell, treat Sakura like a piece of shit, but to Meilin, sh*t he can't even shout at her even for just once! he's just always let her get her way to him. God, I would be jumping in happiness if he yell at Meilin, call her a bitch, reject her, push her away from him, or slap her hard! That would be great! But it's not great because he didn't did any of that. You made an extremely annoying antagonist and you just left her go unpunished. God, that's very unsatisfying. And how you made Sakura a weakling here is sickening. She's just always surrendering to Syaoran. You should at least made Sakura a little hard to get to at least punish Syaoran for being a jerk. |
| apparentdaydreamer chapter 12 . 11/28/2012 I really liked the overall plot and storyline. But there were a few inconsistencies that were very... (for the lack of a better word) annoying. The story came across as a story that was set possibly in the medieval age with lots of nature and magic (with the presence of sorcery and sword fightings). Than you have words like "office" and "hotels" maybe these choices of words are way too modern to be in this story. "office" possibly acceptable, though I was expecting some sort of study/work chamber or something along those lines. But "hotel" was really off, an "inn" would have been better. However these words that i mentioned only made me more aware of the other choices of words that confused me about the time period the story was set in. Other than that, I found this story fascinating and very well written. In fact, you do a fantastic job at making me wish that such a world existed and that I was part of the world you created! THanks so much for an amazing story! apparentdaydreamer |
| Princessblue97 chapter 12 . 6/22/2010 oh my...GOD... I never expected that the ending would be like that... But I really like this story... . Gud Jobe |
| Sailor Meirue chapter 12 . 2/26/2010 OMG this story is really good Lemons and all but one thing i have to critisize about is spelling and grammar sry the story is still awesome tho |
| more-storys chapter 12 . 1/1/2010 god i love the ending i wish boys could be so cute and romantic just like in your stoy loved it so keep it up |
| ying fa chapter 12 . 11/14/2009 hm... the ending was a bit rough... |
| EmeraldBlossom2 chapter 12 . 1/28/2009 I loved this story!, it'd be great to have a sequel! |
| destiny921 chapter 12 . 7/4/2008 Aw~~ |
| rosedreamer101 chapter 12 . 6/20/2008 um the ending could had been better.. |
| MoonPrincess623 chapter 12 . 5/5/2008 I loved it, and would loe for you to do a sequel! |
| Lily887787 chapter 12 . 2/18/2008 great dreams or story! |
| animelover0328 chapter 12 . 12/27/2007 i liked your story very much! pls. make a sequel! i just want to know what adventures or maybe romantic scenes will happen there in the place they were staying... hope you can grant my request... anyways... i luv it very much! that stupid Meilin ruin their happiness! luv it! |
| Divine Illuminance chapter 12 . 12/14/2007 Wow The story started GREAT But I sorta felt the ending was rushed... But HEY, atleast u've FINISHED the thing...Mine's only half done -.- GREAT WORK! Please update more soon! Kimmy :P |
| cherrysakurawolf chapter 12 . 8/6/2007 AMAZING! |
| Nadine chapter 12 . 7/2/2007 Amazing story i liked it a lot |
