Great fic sounds like something Kevin would do..

Oi. Friedman. Yay Kevin! He's got "TV hair," lol.

Cute! Lol, which ones Friedman again? I've hardly seen many of the episodes (Have 2 watch it on LivingTV in crud old England...)

:p Nixi the Pixi

LMAO!

Great story. *applauds* Characterization was spot-on all around. I could picture this happening in an episode. Hopefully it will. Just the image of Kevin running Friedman over would be worth it. :D

And Kevin would be that, like any sibling. 'Nobody can pick on my sister and brother but me.' Very true in families.

Loved this! It's very much in character for both of them. And it's kind of sweet. I thought the Not . . . "Friedman," was a perfect way to put that mood into words. There needs to be more JoA fanfic writers like you!

Sweet.

Hey, does this mean that I can whack my brother because he's my brother, and can beat up anyone else who does? Cool!

This? Is excellent stuff, and I am a critical person. I particularly liked this bit:

"Hefting another sack of groceries, she stole a look at the aluminium-rubber-and-vinyl contraption that was her brother’s cage and freedom in one. Maybe he understood about elephants in the living room."

Thank you very much - I hope you write more!

DF

ahahaha!

has the new season started yet? I don't have cable any more so I'll have to find a website that can give me Joan updates. excellent story - very big-brother-ish, love the

"Dude, you did not just say that when I’ve got a entire steel car at my command instead of just an aluminium wheelchair."

Ahahahaha!

I like that a lot. I hadn't thought of that, but I think you could be right about why Kevin was dissing Joan the whole time...He knows how much it sucks to have people walk on eggshells about something. That wasn't exactly his problem last season, but I think he knows that humor is a better way of dealing than being bitter.

this is really good

very cute

loved the way u captured the sibling dynamic there, reminds me of my brother

good job