Reviews for The Opportunity
Nimmers chapter 5 . 3/18/2013
"So you...thought you...might like to...go to the show. To feel the warm feel of confusion; that space-cadet glow. Tell me is something eluding you, sunshine? Is this not what you expected to see? If you want to find out what's behind these cold eyes, you'll just have to claw your way through this disguise!"

Sorry, Strong Sad's behavior in this just reminded me of Pink from "The Wall" a bit, especially the falling out the window (though Pink only threw a TV through the window).

Also, for some reason, I pictured Homeschool wearing Dark Brotherhood regalia (from "The Elder Scrolls" series) for some strange reason.

All in all, good story.
I Loved It chapter 5 . 3/13/2011
It was a great story, I loved it. I can actually imagine this movie.
cool tapes chapter 5 . 10/20/2005
Heh that's kind of a cool story idea. It was really sad but I was really glad it ended OK. *whew!*

Keep on writing
kels chapter 5 . 9/4/2005
Wow. That was the best fanfic I have read so far. That was a great plot, and I was happy to see that in the end Strong Sad got another chance to make the right choice. Great job.
galabalesh chapter 5 . 3/5/2005
oh..wow *shudder* My friend was playin' this real depressing opera music while I read this chapter and I ended up actually crying!
Brynnie-Chan124 chapter 5 . 2/26/2005
(Crying) That was the saddest, sweetest, most twisting-plotted story i ever read! YOU HAVE MADE THE AWESOME LIST! (glomps)
Gijinka Renamon chapter 5 . 1/9/2005
(My jaw drops)

Wow . . . did all this really happen, or was it just Strong Sad's dream?

Great job anyway.
super orange chapter 5 . 12/31/2004
Great story. I guessed who the friend was all along, I'm so smart. Good jorb!
PPP SSC chapter 5 . 12/31/2004
fhq, when I started reading this story I thought "Whoa, Strong Sad's acting wildly out of character, I'm not sure I like this."

Then I read this chapter, and I'm thinking "Wow, that story was very climactic, and it had a beautiful ending" (Nitpick alert: You mean "Epilogue", Prologues precede stories.) Beautiful, fhq, like your opinions on the forum.

-Overused&Underappreci
LoremIpsum chapter 3 . 10/3/2004
gr im sorry but that strong sad was very mean to kick every one out of their homes! im waiting to see what happens!
LoremIpsum chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
o keep going!
Hysterical Woman chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
O...I think I know who the "friend" is. Will you be contiuning this story or is it a one-shot?
The Experimental Film chapter 1 . 9/27/2004
Hey, Fhqwhgadshgnsdbkhsdabkfab! Nice story! You're what, one of the four authors on the wiki?

-The Experimental Film