Brilliant story. tagicly sad lame depressing ending though but the rest was great could u please do a ending or somthing please.

Pretty poor stuff. Why is there not a new page for every chapter?

BEST DAM STORY ever read. The rest of you that put down this story dont know a good story if it bit ya in teh ass. This is a great story and i hope theres more to come. GREAT GREAT story and read it its well worth your time!

Way to long and I think you have a little too much free time! Get a life!

This story has some excellent areas, and then it had some...not so excellent parts. First, the good stuff. I thought the overall flow of the story, the descriptions, and in general the actual writing of the story was near flawless. I also though that the dialogue between the teens was some of the most "real" I've read in a long time.

Next, the bad stuff: Like another reviewer, I think that some of the sarcastic comments in the story are out of place (I'd be WAY too scared to be funny if I was in that situation). I also thought that you should have explained just what happened to Zach and Judy.

Altogether, it was a fine story to read. I would have preferred Scott to live (He was the one I was hoping for), but with a little work and touch-ups, it could be absolutely fantastic.

For one, this story is way too rushed, for two, the sarcastic things they said were out of nature, and completely stupid, and for three, why the hell would they venture back into school instead of leaving in the first place. Another thing, they had to look for a place out of their own school. Excuse me, but after 2 days, how can you not know a way out of your own school? r...

Cool! I think I know who yoy based some of the characters on. Honestly though, I don't know wether to take it as a complimednt or insult that the character I think based on me died first. I gotta know what happens next!

When are you going to finish this fic? I'd like to find out what happens next!

ARRG! Must have next part! Oh well, I know it takes awhile sometimes to get around to writing, but I look forward to finishing this. I do think you went a bit overboard with how the halls look though.

::shudders:: Oh dear god, is this spooky!

Not a bad story, stayed up a little late daydreaming huh?

Nicely done story or what's been done so far, just one remark, in RE 2, it was said that the police were the ones to name the thing a licker, so I don't think that Umbrella had the same classification for the specimen.

that was pretty articulate for a resident evil story. the 'angel of Misery,' damn...

huh?

Now that was one of the best Resident Evil Fics without the STARS members I have ever read. Just to think, something like that could happen to teenagers in school. It was also kind of sad. I really like it, and I hope it will be finished soon.