Well I'm glad for the Naruhina and Shikaino, though prefer Shikatema. But there suckrua goes again being a pathetic fangirl. If you had Nejiten, which is lost now, why could you not have changed suckura a bit and had ehr get with a good guy, not pine for that loser! Sakutards are so pathetic. she DOES lead Lee and Naruto on, no matter what the tards put. She is cruel and vindictive! Actually suckrua doesn't desserve Lee's love. He's waaaaay too good for her, just like Naruto was!

Suckura is pathetic. She's just a whiny little fangirl and that's all she'll ever be. Apart from the suckura and sasgay mentions, good fic.

I liked the chapter except for the kiss that Hinata gave to Shino...I just feel that it was out of character for Shino and Hinata...and Kiba would have been a jerk for doing such a thing. You made it seem like a REAL serious kiss...and in his place I would have reacted much like Naruto did...maybe worse. Actually, I didn't like this chapter nearly as well as the first one...the story diverted off from NaruHina, I felt, to more of a compendium of a lot of different and confusing relationships. I loved the first chapter as a NaruHina story...but I should have quit with the great chapter one.
Thanks for writing:)
Dan

This was an amazingly well written and fun-to-read first chapter. Naruto and Hinata are just like they should be at the age they are here and in the circumstances that they are in in their lives. The best NaruHina that this guy has read in a while. I hope that there is a lot more to read here.

Updaaaaaaaaaaaate! When you have the time of course! I just LOVE this fic! It's just... AMAZING ! X3 please continue it and I will give you a billion invisible chocolate coins! :D

Wonderful story! You have written a beginning chapter here that is also like a stand alone...and can also be a great leadin to a longer story. This chapter takes them from alone to together and I loved each word.

Soooo...did you mean November 2012? I am not so sure about this chapter...it seemed sooooo different from the first one...and I loved the first chapter. This seemed to stray off into everyone elses love affairs and problems and even Naruto and Hinata seemed to be discontented with each other. By the way...in real life...Shino would have been risking a fight if he really gave more than a peck on the cheek to a possesive guys girlfriend. I would not have risked it:) That would have been considered, in bad taste, for Kiba to set that up at a wedding anyway.

Wonderful story...cool idea, and the way you wrote about them getting together seemed very believable. I seems that, eventhough, this was written 8 yrs ago...it still might take something like this to get them together. We have waited a long time for Kishi to make it happen.

Did you like make shino in love with hinata or something? 0_o I am so confused...

Very nice! I liked that two-shot a lot!

Keep up the good work!

OMG! That was just Ama~zing! I thought it was so funny how she thought they had sex! I mean so did I but that don't mean anything. Anyhow CONGRATS ON A GOOD STORY!

next chapter? soon i hope

I hate to say this about any Naruhina story, but this was awful! It completely takes the tension and drama away from the way Naruto is portrayed to be completely oblivious to love, and that Hinata is supposed to still be that shy girl. I know they've grown up, but in the anime and manga, even, they are still Naruto and Hinata. Here, you make everything sound like they're both loose, and you make it seem like Hinata enjoys getting drunk. I mean, its hard to describe really, but in my mind, this doesn't resemble the two in any way except for the names. sorry dude.

Immunity to poison- figures this is one of the benefits to being a Jinchuriki.

omg i loved it